So I just found this thanks to comment swap and let me tell you that I like it. I am intrigued to find out what happens with the characters and how they develop. The way you write can definitely captivate someone. I absolutely love the world you are creating. I really enjoyed reading this and I am quite excited waitng for more chapters. :) Keep up the great work and never give up writing :)
Keep up the great work and never give up writing :)