Take This to Your Grave - Comments

@ folie a deux
I miss writing them! I just want to make them two characters for every different story I write. Thanks for reading again

re-reading this again because I miss Pete and Naomi :{ <333

This is probably one of the best fanfictions i've read in a while. I was really happy and surprised at how well written and well rounded all of your characters were, and that they stayed so throughout the entire work. Kudos, kudos! I'll start on the sequel during break! :) <3

That was without a doubt the best smut scene in fanfic history, and I feel that way because the relationship was built on a strong foundation and it actually meant something. Like damn my room was steamy. hahahaha

Goodness, reading this over makes me smile so hard it hurts lol

Alright. It is currently 3:20 AM, the second night I've stayed up reading this. And I must say, it was well worth the loss of sleep. Very well done. I'll read the sequel this time tomorrow.(:

This just re-established my obsession with fall out boy <3

Just finished and I like navy more independent.

'I am the typo queen', that made me laugh! This story was perfect, so different from the original. Naomi was a much stronger person in this one and you captured her and Pete's relationship perfectly. You're such a brilliant writer and I can't wait to read the sequel.

Aw i loved this :) im excited for the sequel!

the level of detail and spot-on-ness in naomi and pete's relationship is amazingly like my own and my boyfriend, i am very impressed. kudos

the level of detail and spot-on-ness in naomi and pete's relationship is amazingly like my own and my boyfriend, i am very impressed. kudos

i can tell you do your research well, I love all the little details.

The level of character development you write about is amazing<3 nothing captivates me more. I love that you are taking your time with this. it feels really right!

I like the last two chapters a lot I really like how you are showing Petes Jealous side I think that was something we really needed to see and you did a great job of showing it I like the time skips and though I'll be sad when this one ends I know you'll have the sequel up and ready to go in a hurry

I like them as just friends again but I'm pretty sure that isn't going to last, I mean the two of them are just drawn togather I bet its going to be hard to tear them apart cause they love each other so much...

Much <3 Kat

Awww they love each other. they need to get back together

i love this so far!!

Oh boy, Pete's on a downward spiral

I thought he was getting better but then he goes and blows up on her :(

As I said to a friend yesterday, all couples go through rough patches