This was great you did an amazing transition in the time skips I'm really glad you did it that way I think it would have been dificult writing Naomi handling her jelous ways of Amy and how she was doing with Pete and I feel that she's only going to get worse with him ..
I really like how you're not trying to have Navy just be up and over the lose of the baby I really am loving this update and this version of the story a lot.
One of the reasons I really keep coming back to read this story other then just your writing style is while the main charecter is obviously head over heels for Pete she still has other friends and sees and interacts with her other friends which is something a lot of stories forget to do once a relationship is formed with the main guy...
I like how at first the chapter was really gloomy and then it wasn't near the end, I hope the time skip isn't to long but am very much looking forward to the next update
I did not see the live stream because I was asleep!
This chapter was awesom, I love how it started off with Pete being a little absent but all ge needed was his Navy and he was soon back to himself. It was really cute when Naomi sat with Pete until he was asleep.
oh I really love how the last chapters moved , I mean there was things happening but it wasn't felt rushed or something. I know it sounds fucked up but I'm glad that she lost the baby because I don't know , it didn't felt right , it wasn't the time. I love how Pete was near her all this time for the start until here , and I'm scared that this lost and the fact that he gave her the pills plus he already thinking that he is fucked up is the starting of something really bad. I hope N will observe it and will stay near him because I'm pretty sure that he's gonna loose it. I hope they gonna stay together... oh and I m happy that Pete kicked Eric ass.
Why did I have the feeling that was going to happen? I feel so bad for them. And yay Patrick's in it now! I love that hes being called mr argyle sweater lol