Raised by Wolves - Comments

  • Haysay

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    From Comment Swap -

    Wow, loved it. The story itself is quite unique, I'm not sure what I was expecting but possibly not this, in a good way. It was a good read and I love FIR, so with the nice writing and detail it worked perfectly. I loved the metaphor near the end of the fifth chapter, 'Flaming with Darkness'. ;D
    September 6th, 2012 at 06:22pm
  • Katlight Sparkle

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    ~From comment swap:

    Right so I admit that I don't know who this band is at all but I'm interested nonetheless, which is a good thing. Werewolf stories are popping up all over, but this one is really well done and more interesting than most. Your grammar and writing are well done, and the story overall's intriguing and well paced. Nice work.
    September 6th, 2012 at 12:41pm
  • H3lls_Kitty

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    So glad Comment Swap brought me here. Oh my god I love Falling in Reverse this is one of my Favorite songs by them, you have crushed two of the best things togethere, FIR and Werewolfs the only thing that would have made it better if it was Avenged Seven fold Lol just kidding, i really like this story
    September 6th, 2012 at 07:17am
  • a7xloversyngirl

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    Now this is interesting :)

    First of all, I simply LOVE Falling in Reverse as a BAND - not just for Ronnie, but of course I love him too-, my favorite member being Jacky :)). But of course I love Ryan too :3 ...

    The plot is really interesting and intriguing, the grammar is seemingly perfect too :D. I honestly have nothing else to say, except from PLEASE UPDATE SOON :)

    <3 <3
    September 5th, 2012 at 10:59pm
  • FizzyLemonade

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    I, like others, found this through Comment Swap, and I immediately knew I'd like it - who doesn't like FIR? I love Jethro, and Sam seemed pretty freakin' cool. And I admit, I fangirled at Ryan...

    Okay, so the story is very, very good. It has mystery, the pace's fantastic and the grammar is just...spectacular. Also, the spelling is awesome so thank you for that! Your characterization is just stupendously amazing too. I must admit though, I'm not too keen on OCs unless you're able to handle it. Thankfully, you were able to do.

    So all in all, this is a fabulous story!
    September 4th, 2012 at 09:36pm
  • carriesometimes

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    hello, I found your story through comment swap, but regardless, enjoyed your story. THat being said, I was confused when I read the summary about who this was going to be about (my fault,not yours,haha),since I dont know who Falling In Reverse is. That being said, I really enjoyed your story! Everything about it is good,from the backround,to the flow, to the grammar, everything is perfect! You are a very talented writer, and I already subscriped to your story! I can't wait to read whatever else you post! :)
    September 4th, 2012 at 05:31am
  • l0stinNeverland

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    So, I was sent here through Comment Swap, I thought it was good. I fell in love with both you and the title at the same tike, I'm a huge fan of Falling In Reverse so instantly knew I'd like it! The chapter was good and I'm excited for an update :)
    July 22nd, 2012 at 11:12pm
  • Mcrchick22

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    I knowthis is only the first chapter but it's really good Smile
    July 20th, 2012 at 07:49pm