September 6th, 2012 at 06:22pm
~From comment swap:
Right so I admit that I don't know who this band is at all but I'm interested nonetheless, which is a good thing. Werewolf stories are popping up all over, but this one is really well done and more interesting than most. Your grammar and writing are well done, and the story overall's intriguing and well paced. Nice work.
Wow, loved it. The story itself is quite unique, I'm not sure what I was expecting but possibly not this, in a good way. It was a good read and I love FIR, so with the nice writing and detail it worked perfectly. I loved the metaphor near the end of the fifth chapter, 'Flaming with Darkness'. ;D