Free Falling - Comments

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Might want to work on your commas and you seem to be a bit repetitive at points especially with names but besides those minor details I really like this story! Truth be told I thought I wouldn’t like it but I ended up loving it! Really good job!

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Your grammar is a bit sloppy, especially with commas and what not. I don't normally read fanfics, so I don't know what to expect. Make sure you have everyone's personality right and it was a bit too fast paced for me.

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I agree a little bit with dream'n.reality., the grammar was a bit off for me, you should try re-reading or skimming through the chapter you made to check for grammar that may be a little bit off.

But other than that, you're a really good writer, keep on going and make more stories! :D

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I really enjoyed this, I could read it over again. I like A7X but I wouldn't necessarily read them but I really am enjoying this, keep up with it! I can’t wait to see where you take this further!

Comment Swap:) Right to start off with I got confused, not because of your writing but just because of the way I read things in my head. The way you put 'I'm headed to work,' just didn't sit well with me. This most likely is just a opinion on how I would say it, "heading" but after reading up on it, I don't think it makes a difference. Another thing is the word snarled, I thought maybe it was just a typo but you do it more than once, like 'snarrled' Okay, besides the grammar, you are a very good writer. This story was very easy to read and interesting. It definitely is something I'd enjoy reading more, I hope you write more. :)

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I REALLY like this! I could read it over and over! The way you write is fantastic! It makes me want to go and read everything you've written xD Which, actually I think I will! Can't wait to read more!

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I REALLY like this! I could read it over and over! The way you write is fantastic! It makes me want to go and read everything you've written xD Which, actually I think I will! Can't wait to read more!

I know exactly how the Sunday school thing goes, and exactly how hectic it gets XD. My family always used to go church and I went to Sunday school every Sunday for as long as I can remember. Although I can't say I regret it, I do clearly remember the the chaos that quite often wreaked havoc there. Keep up the good work :)

@ LifeLovesMusic
Yeah Travis noticed that italics thing. I swear I actually read that one over too. -_- Anywho, I changed the title of that "chapter" so people wouldn't get confused. :-P lol. And I went to Walmart tonight with Travis and Hazelbug and didn't see you -_- where were you? We saw Courtney and Shelly...and Fluffy lol. I still can't remember his name. I shall let you go now, so that I can fix my italics mistake, and maybe you'll see this later tonight.

Italics are fixed, and also I'll be singing "Karla's Song" (It's not really titled that, we just call it that because it reminds us of her, for those of you reading all the comments ;-P )

Ps. How dare you change the title of the most awesomest chapter in history!!! haha oh, and what song am I having you sing? For some reason I'm blanking... Crap. I better go get ready for work... Seeing as I was supposed to be there an hour ago :P hahahaha

So remember that one time when you didn't have the italics stop so the rest of the chapter was italicized? Yup, you did it again :P Other than that, I loved it... as usual :)

Love this last chapter :) I loved the fan girl moment and I like how she just dropped the boyfriend bomb on Matt lol next chapters going to be great I can already tell

@ LifeLovesMusic
I will attempt to tomorrow, no promises tho. I'll try and do a rough draft on my ipod and go from there. Soooo...sometime this week for sure. :)

MOOOORE!!! :) please! :)

Darling, you have not posted another chapter yet. You said you would. I'm now disappointed. And very sad. NOW GET WRITING!!! :) love you!

hey :) i just wanna say i like this story a lot and want another chapter, i also dont know why you dont have more comments on here you should have a bunch this story is great well anyway have a good day and update soon lol