Better Than Me - Comments

Why is this described as an Andy/OC when they didn't even end up together? This was really disappointing.

Not gonna lie if my girl was randomly going off to see another dude, I'd be pretty upset and suspicious too. And I don't blame Andy for not wanting to think about getting married. He was only what? 23? Overall it was a pretty good story. =}

The ending was beautiful! It's so sad to know its over, but it's an amazing story :)

so. pretty. of course, i've known she'd end up with him from the moment she set her eyes on him again. ahhh, i'm sad to see it end, especially since some of our more profound conversations revolved around this story.. but there will be others! great job, babe<3

That was a great ending. I think you did it perfectly. :)

You should do a spin off/sequel involving Andy finding a girl. I think he should have a happy ending too. ;p

OH MY GOD. THIS WAS PERFECT. THANK YOU SOOOO MUCH FOR GIVING ME MY HAPPY ENDING. :D I WILL CONTINUE READING YOUR STUFF. I'm glad she's going to be happy now. :D

What a cute ending! I'm glad that it wasn't too corny and it concisely got to the point. And thanks for thanking me if that makes any sense

SQUEEEEEEEE! that was the perfect ending. I don't think she could have done it any better way than in person :-). Haha gotta love Cori and CC. Loooved this story!

I'm so proud of Riley, I thought she wouldn't be able to leave Andy, but she did it :D yay
Update soon? C:

At first I wasn't going to read this story because I wasn't sold on the plot line, but boy was I mistaken. This is a very good story indeed

ABOUT DAMN TIME. it really was shitty of Andy to ask Corinne that and then say all these things like Riley as t going to know what he was doing. It does suck that they're done but I hope she realizes its probably for the better.

Good for Riley! I'm soooooo happy Andy and her aren't together. He was becoming a giant douche bag. He messed up. He had a diamond and threw it away. So I can only wonder what will happen with Jacob. :D

I literally cried reading this chapter. But I see where she's coming from. And as much as I love Andy and wish they would have worked things out... It's impossible to do when they want different things.
Great chapter; captured the emotions perfectly.

About time that she got out what this was doing to her. How he had hurt her. Cori's right. He had his chance. It's hard to love someone after they've done something like that. Now maybe Riley can move on to a happier place in her life. I wouldn't be surprised if Andy says something about Cori butting into his now ex relationship out of anger from Riley refusing to take him back lmao. Loooved it.

am i the only one who wants her to be with andy...

Well... That escalated quickly....

haha nah it was awesome, way to mess with her mind even more though. Hopefully she can sort things out soon so she stops doing her head in!

About time something happened between them. I'll be damned if Andy gets in the way lmao. He had his chance. And he fucked it up. Can't wait to see about this talk. Loooved it.

HOT! But he's not just a rebound. Beautiful men can never be rebound. It's a law of physics...since now. I want to know what she says to Andy. I REALLLY WANT HER TO BE WITH JACOB. Please update sooon! :D

I absolutely love your writing. You're one of the best writers I've come across on Mibba. This story has is right on the line without crossing over to being too dramatic that it's unbelievable. I really like that. It's very well written and as a good story should, it has issues that people such as myself don't always agree with. (Such as the way both Andy and Riley have reacted towards their issues.) But that is what makes this story even better. The fact that you don't always agree with HOW someone reacts, and it makes it so much more believable. It builds that world your story takes place in.
Anyone can write, but only a few can write well and immerse you in a story. This story is one of them.
It builds itself around you, and you don't even realize it until you've started feeling the tears, aches, hurt, and happiness that the character is. I love that you have created a story that does this to me. I've hardly reacted so strongly to writing like this outside of books.
So, Bravo to Vixyn Of Syn.

I am addicted to this story. Please continue with this amazing quality in your updates that you have shown in the past ones.