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  • Star Angel

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    lol loved this update soon please
    January 23rd, 2013 at 12:10am
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    love this please update soon if you need to talk ill be there for ya
    January 9th, 2013 at 08:49am
  • Mrs.Katsumi.Grinch

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    Lets get the critic out first, I noticed a few typo's just where it looks like you hit letters you didn't mean to and I have to show you one specific one:

    Johnny were already in the pool, slashing each other I'm pretty sure you meant splashing, but I almost spit my soup out when I read that I just pictured two grown men in a pool trying to stab one another and I lost it lol you should keep that one

    other then that I thought this to be a really cute chapter, I like how she still seems so akward around everyone but is getting to know them an be there friend at the same time the stuff with her and Val was pretty funny as well as the whole drowning thing

    Much <3 Kat
    January 9th, 2013 at 01:55am
  • gothique4

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    Love the update, and I bet she looks nowhere near as bad as what she thinks she does in the bathing suit. I'm glad that she's bringing Johnny out of his shell.

    I can see Matt as being the big brother type too, along with Zacky. Brian I'm not so sure of - I think he could be interested in Fee but I'm team Fee/Christ :-)
    January 4th, 2013 at 11:40am
  • Mrs.Katsumi.Grinch

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    Me n you have to chat, you made me cry, that isn't cool this chapter was so well put togather and I think it held just the right amount of emotion, but srsly, no more making me cry, deal?

    I am very curious as to what you're cooking that involvs Z now, though they do click pretty well, so did her n Brian it seems really Matt n her bro are the ones she's not going to get super close with super fast..

    I would add Christ in there but I'm under the impresion he's just very bi-polar n going through some shit he cant handle, but Fee is going to help him a lot more eventually isn't she?

    *Is still tots shipping FeeXChrist*

    Also you should up date again on the 27th if you have an update up that fast..

    Happy Holiday if I don't get to comment or talk to you before then.

    Much <3 Kat
    December 24th, 2012 at 12:37pm
  • SarahQuals

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    Love it.
    December 20th, 2012 at 12:31pm
  • Mrs.Katsumi.Grinch

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    Dude, I liked this chapter a lot I don't think it was a filler at all, I think we needed to see how she gets along with the others and whats up with her and Z like seriously I thought this would be bout her and Christ but she seemed to click so well with Z in this one..

    I hope you are able to give us another one soon and are doing well

    Much <3 Kat
    December 14th, 2012 at 09:25am
  • Lexi Wombat

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    Awww, she and Zacky should absolutely get together! As for the awkward silence, I've had my fair share of them and they are not pleasant. >.>
    December 14th, 2012 at 04:53am
  • Star Angel

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    update soon please love this
    November 28th, 2012 at 10:43pm
  • Mrs.Katsumi.Grinch

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    Chapter time

    I like she's getting more intuned with with matt atleast but I'm dying to know what's. Up jhonys ass so ya have to tell me

    I didn't see any mistakes or anything like that so that's good and I hope for another one soon :-)
    November 28th, 2012 at 06:28am
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    Lol fall out boy joke funny I laughed :-) also if you don't go bck to the other two stories I know what you should post :-) and now that I've gotten that off my chest ill go read the update and comment again much love Kat
    November 28th, 2012 at 06:13am
  • Mrs.Katsumi.Grinch

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    I loved this chapter it was just ugh thought i think we need more talking :D

    as always ya know i'm open if a want to talk hope writing really is helping and that you'll have a new update soon

    Much <3 Kat
    November 26th, 2012 at 05:29am
  • Star Angel

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    Update soon please
    November 20th, 2012 at 12:11am
  • SarahQuals

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    I love this story don't give up! :D you're a fantastic writer!
    November 19th, 2012 at 03:04pm
  • Lexi Wombat

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    I really love this, it's definitely not too fast paced and her relationship with Johnny is very interesting. When she mentioned how pristine and cared for the drum kit was I actually felt my heart break a little, because that's the only thing Johnny really cares about anymore; the one object that Jimmy left behind. I'm so happy you started writing this again, I just found this today and I'm in love with it already (:
    November 19th, 2012 at 06:07am
  • Star Angel

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    love this please update soon
    September 18th, 2012 at 10:38pm
  • Mrs.Katsumi.Grinch

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    Dude loved this I just I don't know what it is about you're writing but I freaking love ita nd I love this story and I know Ive already told you all this before but if you need any one to talk to I'm here..

    this was a good update I hate she's getting sick, I like that Christ tried to talk to her and is trying to be some what nice yet creepy at the same time, cant wait to see what her relationship grows in to with him or if she meets Gates and Vengance

    Also dude just update when you can you're stories are so good I bet all your readers will stick around

    Much <3 Kat
    September 18th, 2012 at 03:12am
  • Star Angel

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    more soon please
    August 26th, 2012 at 08:31am
  • Mrs.Katsumi.Grinch

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    I loved this update, I'm so happy that things are moving fast yet slow I like it and I like how Christ is kind of an ass yet kind of not, I cant wait to see what happens when they start to get along assuming they get along..

    I hope things are going okay with school and all that jazz, like always my messages are always open if you want to chat about stories or other things, :)

    I don't think this was a filler myself but what do I know, I think this was kind of needed to show us her job and how she enteracts with Christ I really like how she felt about his food and water I think that was something that needed to be showed by thats just me

    Much <3 Kat
    August 25th, 2012 at 09:04am
  • RelentlessChaos

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    Woo, go Pheonix! I'm glad she stood up to Johnny. It sounds like someone needs to give Johnny a good kick up the arse.
    Writing for relief I think is always a good form of healing, so to speak. It works for me sometimes.
    Great update. Loving this story. Update soon. :D
    August 19th, 2012 at 02:59am