Dude I love how she stood up to Christ so fast like that, I like how this is going and you're taking your time with doing everything and how its not like bahm she's in love and their happy and then theirs problems and stuff I love how she doesn't even know who they are yet her brother obviously does which tickled me and made me laugh but I like how he obviously didn't freak out over it..
I know how you feel on writing about personal exsprince it does make you feel a lot better I've done some of my stories the same way and it is a nice reliefe to be able to get some of that out and its even better when people like the story.
Now I'm rambaling so keep up the good work and all that shiz and update again soon please I've fallen so in love with this story so much its not even funny almost more then your other story :D
I like this story a lot and you're on a roll with this one and just I love how you took time to build a stable sort of relationship with her brother, and how you didn't just throw her in to all kinds of things with her knowing they guys already and stuff like that I love how you're doing this story I cant tell you that enough like seriously
I like this story so far. I hope Pheonix has a lot more happiness to come her way. I guess I'll have to wait to see if she does. Update soon, please. :)
I'm quite happy decided to stalk your stories page, haha. I'm really glad I clicked on this story. I'm really enjoying the detail being put into this as we see Pheonix go through trying to become one with the real world(in a sense) again, the job search and just in general. I'm for sure subscribing and looking forward to more. C:
I like this, it very well written, I think you're doing a great job of showing how she's dealing with being realeased and how her brother is dealing with it as well its a nice Dynamic you have set so fare
I really like that you havent made everything like it was when she left or that she seems to really out of touch with the outside world a lot of stories don't to either of them things and you've done them perfectly I think.
I didn't find ant errors or anything like that, and the layout is lovely it doesn't hurt the eyes or take away from teh story so that is good..