Can't Fight This Feeling - Comments

Heyo, I'm also here for comment swap! I haven't watched much Supernatural but I did enjoy reading this story so far. I do agree with what @ZackyEffingVengeance said, about maybe explaining their back story a little more, maybe not altogether in a typical, backstory-explaining paragraph but gradually and stuck into the story here and there. Also curious as to what Nyx's secret is c: I did really like this though, you should keep writing!

Just found this story and I really like it! Update? :)

Hi :) I'm here from comment swap.

I liked your story. The plotline is good so far, but as a person who'd not too knowledgeable on Supernatural, I think you maybe could have explained the boys' backstory a little. On a grammatical note: whenever you have narration following dialogue and the narration isn't 'he said; she replied; I said, etc' then the first letter of the sentence should be capitalized. I got very confused during the first few chapters because of that. But other than that, it's very good! I'm curious about what Nyx's secret is and why she had the falling out with the boys (I love me some drama). Good luck!

I FOUND THIS AND YOU NEED TO GET BACK TO THIS BECAUSE OMFG I NEED TO KNOW WHAT'S GONNA HAPPEN!!!!!!!!!!!

This is so lovely- fantastic job writing so far !
I can't wait to see where this goes, the plot line is really great and has so much potential.
Well done, keep it up !
xobryn

I'm really not into supernatural but you're a really great writer uwu

@ mosher123
Ahah I shall do my best, thanks for the comment! :D

I really need to know what happened to her. And when are her and Dean going to get it on? I know it's coming.
Update soon.

@ SuperBeachKid
Awh thank you so much! :D The first few chapters are probably going to be focused on the Supernatural side of it so ghosts and stuff. Just so I can recreate a bond between them all, but I plan on shifting the focus to them soon. Obviously there is going to be ghosts throughout ahaa you shouldn't force yourself to read something that scares you ;) but it means a lot to me that you'd even try, so thank you!

Thank you once again comment swap! Ok, first off, your first chapter did NOT suck balls. I actually love it so far for the simple fact that you set the scene so I'm not just completely in the dark about what's happening. I would definitely continue this story, but ghosts scare me to death. Still, I might just brave it because just from reading the first chapter I can tell it's going to be a really good one. Keep up the great work! :)

@ anditsabeautifulday
Ahah same don't worry! I'm starting from Season 1 again which is going to be a mistake at exam time aahha and thank you so much your comment means a lot to me! :D

Ah, Supernatural. The show that scares me witless and makes me swoon all in the breadth of a minute. Haha, but in all seriousness, I like how you're portraying the main characters so far. You're a thoughtful and descriptive writer so keep it up! I'll for sure be checking back for more!

I am completely hooked on this story. It is so well written. I can't wait for the next update.

I just started watching Supernatural about a week ago so I have little clue about the entire plot. As far as I can tell you've captured the already build personalities of Sam and Dean already. You have beautiful descriptions, and the story hooks you in from the very beginning. I'm honestly excited to see where you end up taking this. You have minimal spelling and grammar issues, superb. All in all keep on writing. :)

Okay I realized just how shitty my comment was. First off I just want to say that I really enjoy this plot and although I haven't watch Supernatural much I have watched some of it so I know what is going on, not completely but I'm still there. There are a few grammar issues but I could care less, I know that I have some grammar issues as well. But all in all I really enjoy this story and hope for you to continue on!

Ooh, this is a nice plot! I really enjoyed it!

THIS IS THE FIRST TIME I'VE EVER GOTTEN A SUPERNATURAL STORY VIA COMMENT SWAP! Winning!

Hahaha, anyway. I love they you're almost on par with spelling and grammar. That's the biggest thing I have to check with stories. I cannot read them when I can't understand them. It annoys the crap out of me. Anyway, I read the first chapter, and now I'm going back for the rest. Good freaking job!

love it love it LOVE IT! OMG <3

I'm not really interested in Supernatural fanfics. I remember when I first got this story, I did read a few chapters, but I honestly didn't know what to say in the comment. I'm sorry for wasting your time by having you read this. But I will tell you that I like your writing style. You have just enough details. And I didn't see very many spelling errors. You went back and gave excellent details about the character's history but you didn't overwhelm me with it.

This just isn't my type of story. Dx I'm sorry. You did a good job though.

I'm not really interested in Supernatural fanfics. I remember when I first got this story, I did read a few chapters, but I honestly didn't know what to say in the comment. I'm sorry for wasting your time by having you read this. But I will tell you that I like your writing style. You have just enough details. And I didn't see very many spelling errors. You went back and gave excellent details about the character's history but you didn't overwhelm me with it.

This just isn't my type of story. Dx I'm sorry. You did a good job though.