Can't Fight This Feeling - Comments

Wow love this. Definelty gonna subscribe. Haven't really watched Supernatural before,but you explain it well so that I can understand the story without having watched it. I love your writing, and I can't wait to see what happens between them. I have a feeling Dean and Nyx are gonna have some kind of romantic involvement, but that could just be me.

Oh my....I love Supernatural. I got this from the comment swap and I read it all right away. You gave good details on the characters history without giving away too much. Also, your details of the house were very creative. I love the relationship between Nyx and Dean. They both are so similar, but they piss each other off. I'm subscribing and recommending this. Can't wait until the next update :)

This is really good c: please continue?:)

LOVE the story please keep it up and LOVE the name Nyx. I'm huge on greek mythology.

Well now it makes sense why he was mad at her. I can understand that. Still curious as to what happened to her. Update again soon!

I forgot i was reading off a website for a minute. I though i was reading on my kindle for androids app. I love this story and i find almost no errors whatsoever. I hope you continue these amazing updates!

I really like this. I'm curious as to what she said to Dean 10 years ago and to her 'accident'.

Comment swap brought me here. Oh nice, a Supernatural fan fic! The opening paragraph is powerful and really drags the reader in! Your detailing and descriptive are amazing and paint a very realistic story. The dialogue needs a little refining but it doesn’t take away from the beauty of the story. Great writing, and amazing job - keep it up!

I love your story and the plot but I would suggest working on the dialogue a little more because right now Dean and Sam almost sound like teenagers sometimes. Other than that, it's remarkably realistic and I look forward to seeing more in the future.

I love the theme and the summary, it's a great way to start of your story. I'm so happy that Comment Swap sent me here because I'm a massive fan of supernatural, seen as I'm in the six week holidays my mission(if I choose to accept it... and I have) is to watch all the episodes, I'm currently in season 4 so I'm excited to carry on reading this :)

I love the theme and the summary, it's a great way to start of your story. I'm so happy that Comment Swap sent me here because I'm a massive fan of supernatural, seen as I'm in the six week holidays my mission(if I choose to accept it... and I have) is to watch all the episodes, I'm currently in season 4 so I'm excited to carry on reading this :)

Looovee the story so far! Keep it up. :)

Oh my gosh! Dean is so...Dean! I loved the fact that when I read this story, their dialog sounded like something they'd say! I know that sounds weird, but they are more...realistic. The story is smooth which is a little hard in 3rd person so hats off to you! This is wonderful and I can't wait for an update! :) (Comment Swap.)

I'm definitely looking forward to seeing where this goes! 3rd person writing is tricky (I rarely do it) kudos to you for going for it! Once you get going I'm sure it'll come to you no problem! In the meantime I want more to read :) keep up the good work!

Cool story :D

From comment swap =)I've read a few Supernatural stories,I'm not a regualr veiwer so I don't know much about the character and what not. but your character became alive while reading this and that tells me your a good writer. No spelling, gramatical or typo mistakes, that I could find. Although that doesn't distract me from the story. I really like it so far, keep it up.

So i was sent here from Comment Swap, and I about laughed when I saw who it was about. I, no joke, have Supernatural playing on my TV right in from of me, and I just so happen to get a Supernatural story!
Anyway, I thought that your writing was decent, not bad by any means but it could use some work. Your characterization was good, and I thought that you captured Dean pretty damn well (being too pride and holding a grudge for something small.) Although, it would have somehow been better if Sam was referred to as a lady at some point, just throwing that out there!
( I had to put that! It just happened in the episode I'm watching. )

First dean story and I like it so far keep up the good work.