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  • Caitosaur.

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    I own a copy of the bro code......
    July 28th, 2012 at 06:17am
  • QueenNialler

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    I wasn't really watching for mistakes until the last paragraph haha but in this sentence, you put from instead of for. "I went back to my normal behavior of just listening in on the conversation while I ate the food Niall had brought back from me." Other than that, no biggie c:
    Again, way to go on another AMAZING chapter. I'm so glad Eleanor knows now, but I feel like she might accidentally let something slip..
    I'm also kind of peeved that Niall likes Caroline and he's never even met/seen her. I have a feeling that she's going to inadvertently draw his attention when they see each other and then start flirting... which could be a BIG problem.
    Ugh, the suspense is killing me though :c
    Update soon and I hope your foot heals fast! <3
    July 28th, 2012 at 05:59am
  • stephie-is-love13

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    Loving this story. Cant get enough. Hope to see more soon. :)
    July 28th, 2012 at 05:48am
  • honeyjoons

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    Ugh Bless Eleanor. She's wonderful and I knew she wouldn't be a narc! I found it adorable when she was saying how she and Dani needed to get Callista and Niall together. While I do hope they end up together, not yet! She still has to kick more butt on tour. I hope when they tell Danielle that she's okay with it too.

    I also agree with Eleanor. British TV is better, bar Teen Wolf, Big Time Rush and Friends. Other than that, I also prefer British shows. Anywho, I can't wait for more! :)
    July 28th, 2012 at 05:36am
  • lumosmancer

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    Oh wow! That was a cliffhanger and a half! You have to update soon because Im dying to read the rest of El's reaction! Purlease update soon!:)
    July 27th, 2012 at 06:02pm
  • honeyjoons

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    OhmyGOD THAT CAUGHT ME OFF GUARD. I mean, at least it was El and not one of the boys but eh gad! Obviously bathing was a fatal mistake on her part. Ugh I can't wait to see what happens next!
    July 27th, 2012 at 04:29am
  • ericafbabyy

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    Shiiiiit, I knew showers would eventually mess her up lol.
    July 27th, 2012 at 04:23am
  • dawn of light

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    HAHAHA the guys are priceless when Dani and El were coming. And when Lo mentioned Perrie, Zayn was hilarious!
    July 27th, 2012 at 03:41am
  • honeyjoons

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    Ick, I hope your foot gets better soon!

    This chapter was just fine as a filler. I especially couldn't help but laugh when she yelled at Niall to take her to her bunk. I can already tell that if/when they find out she's been a girl all along, it'll be very emotional. For me at least because I'm a sap and have a lot of feels.

    Anywho, I can't wait for the next update.
    July 26th, 2012 at 02:45am
  • QueenNialler

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    This chapter was brilliant! I love this story so much c:
    Also, thank you for doing the outfit.. you really didn't have to and it was very thoughtful c':
    July 25th, 2012 at 10:52pm
  • lumosmancer

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    wow! Grrrrrrrreat chapter Sydney! I laughed really loudly at bits, especially the ones dawn of light just mentioned! Keep up the good work and remember that pic of Callista/Kyle! Update sooooooon!
    July 25th, 2012 at 10:26pm
  • dawn of light

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    “LET’S GO KICK SOME AMERICAN ASS!!!”

    "NIALL, CARRY ME TO MY BUNK"

    HAHAHHAHAHAHAH I love those lines. Congrats on your subs/readers! You deserve those!
    July 25th, 2012 at 09:50pm
  • lumosmancer

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    ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh Officially Love This! How did you come up with something this good?! Update soon!!!:)
    July 25th, 2012 at 09:01pm
  • Mogar.

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    akjflakjflajslkdjalf Haha. Kyle's first fan girl and shipping names. It's official, "he's" on tour now. You can't be official until tumblr and twitter recognize you. xD
    July 25th, 2012 at 09:18am
  • i'll find my way.

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    THIS IS SO CUTE!!
    July 25th, 2012 at 08:25am
  • honeyjoons

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    Ah I love TC and Austin Gibbs! I've met them multiple times and they are all so sweet and chill.

    Anywho, fillers are fine! They're entertaining, haha. I loved how they were poking fun at her already. And that 'bro code' bit cracked me up. I hope you update soon and have fun at the show!
    July 25th, 2012 at 05:24am
  • QueenNialler

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    This story is SO creative! I love it already!
    I'd love to see a picture of what Kyle/Callista is supposed to look like, or the outfits she's wearing. I'm kind of a visual person so it helps when I'm reading a story haha..
    You don't have to, of course! It's just a suggestion c:
    I'm definitely going to keep an eye out for updates.
    July 25th, 2012 at 05:05am
  • dawn of light

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    I love they were making fun of her/him already hahaha

    Ooou and she's already reccomending herself to Niall hahah

    Great job!
    July 25th, 2012 at 04:39am
  • honeyjoons

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    Her and Niall already, God bless it! I was cracking up when she said "Like food? I eat, sleep, and breathe food,". She and Niall are perfect for one another already!
    The part with the nerf guns in the beginning was also perfect and I can totally see them doing that. Can't wait for more!
    July 24th, 2012 at 01:26am
  • dawn of light

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    OH my gawd. SHE AND NIALL ARE ALL READY CONNECTING :')
    July 23rd, 2012 at 09:05pm