Rise and Fall - Comments

woops i totally forgot to comment on the last chapter.. soooorry!! but uhm yeah, zacky.. damn he's weird and super creepy! O_o

new chapter; aawe matt is so cute!! and what surprise?? aah can't wait for the next chapter..

btw lovin' that you go all out on the workouts, that you really write down the things they do and not just skip the details

Liked the new chapter more than the last! Update soon!!!

What damn surprise? :OOOO hehe, an involuntary date for her maybe? haha xD

What damn surprise? :OOOO hehe, an involuntary date for her maybe? haha xD

By "nice surprise" we mean they're getting laid, right? It just needs to happen already. I mean shit Matt would be great in - never mind, naughty thoughts getting in the way. But that class with Zack will be fun. I imagine he'll be messing with her hardcore and probably trying to partner up with her. Aha, I can't wait for the creepy little freak to come back. :) more soon please <3

O___o
A nice surprise???
They should just fuck already. xD
Please update soon!!

Awesome chapter!
Kinda wanted to know what Matt was thinking also.
Update soon please!

omg.. my reaction was the same to hers at "rape" and oh me gee, 'green eyes' haha, is bad ass xD Love the story btw. If I could marry a story, I would marry this. :)

Omg! Love this story, update soon, it's really really gooooood!!!

I'm going to sound like such a wimp but it's true: I don't like scary Zacky. I was obsessed with him when I was younger and thinking of him really being like that makes me shiver. Don't get me wrong, I still love the story and all, but Zackyyyy. Anywho, can't wait for more<3

Love love this so much please update soon like nowish lol

I'm wondering what is going through Matt's mind with the special attention, explanations and now this too.. Hmm.. I wonder if she will change her address at the gym first, before telling Matt she moved or maybe neither... But he'll probably find out anyways.. Hmm.. Good psycho lines for Zacky btw! And good chapter.

I LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE THIS STORY. Updaaate!

Love this please update soon

I love avenged gang stories, but they are usually the same, as in they kidnap and such. Not this one! And I love it. I'm addictedd. :D Pleasee keep writingg.

Thought they were going to kiss for a minute...Then I got to thinking that it was too soon for that.
I really am loving this story!
Please please please update soon!!

Awwwwh. This is my favorite chapter so far. Her and Matt are just too adorable<3 But daaamn, Matt a gangster? Are the rest of the guys, like, behind the scenes dudes since it's mostly Matt and Brian out in the gym? Well either way, I can't wait for more!

Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh :P She knows now, also Matt is so freaking cute :P. I'm excited to see where you'll take this

wiihoo now we know his secret!! yay.. hahah
aawe! he'll protect his cupcake.. that is just so sweet <3

Yep, she's hooked on the mystery of the bad boy. I wonde what else you have planned for all of this and how you plan on doing it. What this new information will mean for her. Hmm.. Good chapter.