Rise and Fall - Comments

Wow!
I can't believe Matt did that..
I hope those people don't hurt her!
Please update soon!!

Aww, sorry I didn't comment on the last update. For some stupid reason I didn't get an email about an update. I really am still enjoying it. I wonder why Matt doesn't his real name out and I can definitely picture Matt calling people cupcake. So cute<3 Can't wait for more! :)

love this please update soon llike nowish lol more more more more more more more

Excellent story, love. Keep it coming.

holy frickin hell!! O_o okay i soooo can't wait to find out why the hell ppl would shoot at the gym..!! and damn.. this story is just so good!! :D

I'm guessing she's hooked on his bad boy style. Most girls love themselves a bad boy. So why should she be any different? Hehe x) wondering what is up and how he plan on explaining everything. Hmm.. Good chapter.

love this please update soon like nowish lol

oh damn he can be really sweet when he wanna be but that phone-call.. pmslmao!! talk about embarrasing!! hahahahahah cupcake.. brian was like a little kid at christmas when he found out danielle wanted his number, so cute!!! and now she knows shadows real name.. wiiie can't wait for more <3

So mystery bad boy M. Shadows is being all... well.. mysterious... I wonder what you have planned for this and what is up with him. That whole old MMA fighter thing (at least I think it's MMA xD) can be a mystery in itself. Hmmm.. Good chapter.

Awesome update!!
More soon please!

Alright, Im hooked! Corey is a fucking dick, and Shadows is just as bad for letting him pull that shit. She shoulda throw a bottle right back at him! Cant wait for more!

so new to the story and since this story is still just starting that might be just fine ^.^ Anyways, I really like this. It's original (at least to me it is) and I think that's about it. I can't really say much about it yet. But maybe that'll come later on. Good story and I'm subscribing.

Ahaha, silly Corey. I think Shadows was kind of letting Corey be an ass since he was annoyed with her kind of being mean in class. But I really liked this chapter. Can't wait for more! c:

Shadows should beat the shit outta Corey for that!
More soon please!!

hahah corey, what a douche i hope shads beat him up for what he did

I like this a lot so far. It's really different from a lot of stories I read and it's like a breath of fresh air for me. Keep up the awesome work! :)

Love this!!!

I really like this! Super original!

This is awesome so far can't wait to read more <3