You Mean the World to Me, Jack Barakat - Comments

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omg so so amazing!!!

omg.omg.omg. more soon please!!

@ sowrongitsaynsley
wow i totally just misspelled everything haha, but you're welcome :)

@ alexaaaxo
aww, thank you! C:

ahhhh! i cant believe tony did that. cant wait fro the nest chapter!

@ imacrimiminal
thanks. Im sorry about the grammar and spelling. It's my first posted fic. Im sorry! but thanks for reading it! C:

it's a good story! but if you fixed your spelling and grammar it would be better.

can't wait to read more :)

I love this so far! Just a little tip to help make the dialogue more legible would be to start a new paragraph for every sentence someone says, for example:
"HOLLY CHEATED ON YOU?!"
"yeah she did."
"That bitch, Jack im so sorry though."
"it was fine. i was going to break up with her anyway, she was very rude. Now come on, please help me unpack and hangout?"
Keep updating though!