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You Mean the World to Me, Jack Barakat - Comments
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omg so so amazing!!!November 18th, 2012 at 08:46am
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omg.omg.omg. more soon please!!November 5th, 2012 at 05:12am
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@ sowrongitsaynsley
wow i totally just misspelled everything haha, but you're welcome :)October 21st, 2012 at 07:22am -
@ alexaaaxo
aww, thank you! C:October 21st, 2012 at 07:05am -
ahhhh! i cant believe tony did that. cant wait fro the nest chapter!October 21st, 2012 at 06:58am
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@ imacrimiminal
thanks. Im sorry about the grammar and spelling. It's my first posted fic. Im sorry! but thanks for reading it! C:October 7th, 2012 at 04:52am -
it's a good story! but if you fixed your spelling and grammar it would be better.October 6th, 2012 at 07:45am
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can't wait to read more :)July 31st, 2012 at 09:30pm
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I love this so far! Just a little tip to help make the dialogue more legible would be to start a new paragraph for every sentence someone says, for example:
"HOLLY CHEATED ON YOU?!"
"yeah she did."
"That bitch, Jack im so sorry though."
"it was fine. i was going to break up with her anyway, she was very rude. Now come on, please help me unpack and hangout?"
Keep updating though!
July 30th, 2012 at 08:13pm
