I understand the feedback bit, I literally have NONE. It sucks. But whatever, i love writing and people being quiet bums won't stop meh! I can't wait for the next bit ! I'm soo excited!
i completely understand the whole uninspired thing. that's hwo i was when i was finishing my one story b/c i was getting all this negative feedback and all this hate on one character and i was just like...ok.... but i love all your stories so far! and i love this one! Christian is such an interesting character. Can't wait to see how him and stark get along!
i'll be completely honest with you and tell you that i kinda like this more than the other stories. Chris is just so awesome xD (not just because he reminds me of someone hehe). i just love the way you can make his thoughts and feelings seem completely normal when they're not usual by most people. and you're chapters are really long and detailed and ver descriptive. i can basically see everything in my head x]
awesome, really. i really, really like the idea and the way you write this, don't dare ever give up. i might not always have the time to read and comment immediately, but just don't stop.
and btw, i'm still very curious about the last chapter to Your Body is a Wonderland, just so you know ^^
As you can probably tell your other story brought me here but I'm so glad that it did! :3
It's defintely a lot different than your other writing but it's totally in an amazing way, if anything it's a lot slower, but I really like how you're sort of building up this life and his character of Christian before diving into the action because I really get a stronger feel for this boy.
I actually really like him in the sort of unconventional way, and he always manages to pull on my heart strings with the whole I want to be numb thing. :c Oh gosh I just can't wait until he's filled with Stark emotions! But I really like his no bullshit attitude and how frank he is with people, like this is Christian take it or leave it, but he still has feelings which you can tell with the weird remark.
I can't wait to read more and really excited for more Stark! I love how chill he is about everything tools xD <3
Can't wait for the next bit, and I agree with the other comments, I can't wait until we get to see his soft side (if he has one haha) I'm super excited to meet stark!!
I love Christian <3 <3 <3 He is a MONSTER AND I LOVE IT. Those are my favorite types of characters, they always become soft sooner or later. ANd so this brother comes in a month? Ooohh spicy! His mommy is nothing but nice to him I kinda feel bad for her. I hope his step dad isn't too big a douche lord. I really like this story a lot! I'm glad I followed from Your body Is A Wonderland ;) Which I'm about to go read the update right now ^.^ I don't comment much, be happy I had something to say babe! P.S I dislike Abbi and her cliche. I hate cliches, I see them enough at my schoool, aND WE ARE A PUBLIC SCHOOL NOT IN THE SUBURBS! Anywhore, update this again, like right now. I can't wait to see what happens next!