The Truth About Forever - Comments

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Your layout is absolutely impeccable. It fits the story very well, and I'm especially excited to read more.

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Your story is really cute and I loved reading it. Your layout and really pretty and I like the pic on top...It's called a gif i think.... Your writing style is amazing and the story just flows. There were not any major mistakes with grammar or spelling that I noticed. Good Job. I hope you continue to write this. Good Luck :)

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I think this is a really cute story, with awesome potential :) The chapters are kind of short, but I'm sure that you can make it work! Other than all of that, I really didn't find any spelling or grammar errors. Keep up the good work, this story is great :D

I think, judging by the prologue, it will turn out to be a very pretty story. The layout is extremely beautiful, and I also love Ed Sheeran so that's an added bonus. The mystery behind the two character is compelling. Please write more :)

1) The layout is extremely pretty and 2) this is very, very good. The prologue makes me want to know more about how the man's affair affected his family (because of the last line I'm assuming the story's about his daughter, but I might be wrong.)

Nice prologue so far, the concept is interesting and I've often contemplated it when thinking about how Edward is like 100 and Bella is like 17 so I've thought of this before. Looks like it'll be interesting but I'm not really into full on romance stories. You write pretty well even in the odd way you were doing it for your prologue! Good job! "D

I really like this story. I love your writing style and the way the layout is makes it look that much more appealing for me to read. I am one who enjoys a story more if it's presented on a pretty canvas.

One thing though: He would listen and place his hand over his in comfort while she told stories of hardship and bad luck. Do you mean to write over her hand? :) Keep it up!