As Your Nightmare Comes To Life - Comments

I like the beginning with the little background story when you introduced the character. It's interesting, and I would be lying if I said I didn't like it. It is a very good opener for a story.

I find it adorable that Matt was teasing Olivia about her pets. It's just adorable, and I already starting to like the characters. I love that in a story where I immediately loved the characters in the story. I just thought that I would mention that.

This is a really good story. It has a really strong start, and it stays thorough out the story. I think this is really well-written, and I will most definitely read more.

UM WHAT NO, THERE HAS TO BE MORE.

I just read this entire thing [stupidly] thinking that it was completed, and then I find this cliffhanger! Update soon, please! :)

I find this as nothing more than pristine condition for me if Gareth and Buffalo Bill get together. It's gonna give it hell or it's going to kill it. As you can see, I'm terrible at Buffalo Bill impersonations. I just wish that Gareth's a ventriloquist dummy, now that would scare the living-daylights out of anyone who's afraid of those dolls.

I find this as nothing more than pristine condition for me if Gareth and Buffalo Bill get together. It's gonna give it hell or it's going to kill it. As you can see, I'm terrible at Buffalo Bill impersonations. I just wish that Gareth's a ventriloquist dummy, now that would scare the living-daylights out of anyone who's afraid of those dolls.

I just found this story and as creepy as it is, I can't wait for more. Very masochistic of me but I want to see how this ends lol

That was...unsettling. Definitely do not want to be the one who finds something like that. And then I feel bad for Jason. I don't know whether he loved her or not, but he did really care about so it would still be heartbreaking to find her dead, even worse with her being brutally murdered. It does kind of tick me off that he was so quick to turn on Matt though. Even if he's not thinking straight, it's hard to believe that he would actually think his friend would do something like that. Damn Gareth and his manipulation. This is going to turn out bad too. Can't wait for more! :D

Jason now is not the time we blame our friends.

oh gareth is a creepy piece of shit that's for sure trying to put the blame on matt.. shit is about to hit the fan..

and poor brian being the one to find all the bits and pieces left of anna in the pool... O.o

This comment is a couple days overdue. Sorry about that. I've been in the last funk for the last week where I haven't really been able to focus enough to do much of anything. :/ And I may not have realized it was this story that updated haha.

Anyway, I was not expecting that. I mean, I knew death was imminent, but I never really grasped that concept if you know what I mean. I'm so stupid. Being totally honest, I wasn't that torn up over it or even affected really other than not expecting it. Not that I wanted her to die or anything, but it did irk me that she only decided to start acting nicer if it meant not being killed. Too little, too late. And now I'm really wondering what Gareth's deal is. What exactly are his feelings towards Mary Elizabeth? And why is he killing people, and is it just him behind it. Or is it really him? Is it something taking his form or like possessing him or something? So many questions. But this was good. I'm happy to see you updating! :)

Thank goodness, I couldn't handle anymore of that girl!!! So happy you updated, I've missed this story!!

Loved the update

Ha! She's dead :p I'm so scared for everyone else though!! Glad you're back dear :)

oooh now that was a nasty death- and gareth is the creeper.. i wonder how or what he is.. and who's going to be next- if any of them is going to be able to escape or not

And I hope Anna is the first to die >.<

I'm finally caught up!!! This story is uber scetchy and I love it!!! You're a good writer!!! So glad I discovered it!!!!

I get more annoyed with Anna with the more I read. -_- I kind of hate that Jason just lets her push him around so much. Doesn't matter how he feels about her, their power dynamic isn't going to work for long. And if she actually survives, I'm hoping she'll change into a better person. And she needs to let the jealousy thing go too. Olivia isn't wasting her time on Jason anymore, and I don't think Jason was ever interested in Olivia like that anyway.
Anyway, I'm still grasping at straws trying figure out what's going on. I'm kind of dying to know the details behind all this. Loved the update though! :D

Loved the update

so glad you updated - now let's get some more updates please - and yes I agree, HTTK is amazing!!

hehehe anna was taken for a spin.. that's what she gets for being a bitch and ruining that portrait.. this story is slightly creepy and so awesome

Can Anna just die?