As Your Nightmare Comes To Life - Comments

  • shortygirl

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    Seriously Anna! Olivia is already blaming herself. Jason was just as bad. He could've told Anna to stop but he just sat back and watched.
    July 16th, 2013 at 05:32am
  • Synful Shadows

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    I really did want to slap Anna in this chapter. I've been kind of neutral to her before, but that just made me not like her. I could've halfway dealt with the whole "Jason's the only smart one" but then to purposely upset Olivia was just too much. As if they didn't have enough problems, they don't need to start antagonizing each other now. I'll wait for karma to get her because she definitely deserves something bad to happen to her. I'm not saying I want her dead, but I wouldn't be overly upset about her dying either. And Jason's just a bad. He could've said something, but he didn't, just sat there and watched it happen. That's probably going to cause issues too dammit. Great update!
    July 16th, 2013 at 12:12am
  • helena_88

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    damn i was more or less waiting for anna to fly out that open window.. moahahah.. don't like her! and she's made jason stupid *pouts*
    July 15th, 2013 at 09:40pm
  • Quoth Raven

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    UGH screw Anna, they just should just use her for bait and then they run away lol.
    I agree with you on this! I haven't wanted someone to get murder in a story so much!!!
    July 15th, 2013 at 09:13pm
  • WhoAreYouJudy

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    UGH screw Anna, they just should just use her for bait and then they run away lol.
    July 15th, 2013 at 07:17pm
  • SinnerforVengenz

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    This is such a fucking great story! I just started reading today and it kept my mind off cory... *sighs* anyway GREAT STORY CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT UPDATE XX
    July 14th, 2013 at 10:14pm
  • shortygirl

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    Loved the update
    July 9th, 2013 at 04:27am
  • Synful Shadows

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    You tease. Grr You actually had me thinking that Gareth was going to tell them about what was going on. All he said was they weren't going to leave the house alive, which wasn't news at all. And then he made them think he's the one that's going to kill them, but I think that's just a ruse to distract them from the real killer. I'm kind of pissed off now, and I'm going to go pout for a little while. Can't wait for more though.
    July 9th, 2013 at 12:34am
  • helena_88

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    well something tells me that they wont be any safer if they kill gareth.. don't think he's the one that has been scaring their asses off so.. O_o this is creepy and awesome Mr. Green
    July 8th, 2013 at 11:33am
  • WhoAreYouJudy

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    GURLLLLLLL just read this whole story for the first time & I love it! Reading it at night in bed alone & I'm not gonna lie, I was getting a little scared lol. Great story!
    July 8th, 2013 at 10:37am
  • synystergirl

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    Uh oh - what will they do now??? Hurry and update please - and yes Happy Birthday to Brian Haner Jr.!!!
    July 8th, 2013 at 04:20am
  • Quoth Raven

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    Oooh, I hope they find a way out of that situation and fast. This chapter really took an interesting twist for me! I can't wait to see what you come up with next.
    July 8th, 2013 at 04:19am
  • Synful Cocktail

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    Oh my god.
    I just.... This is so creepy, and so very well written. This chapter- omg.
    July 2nd, 2013 at 03:21pm
  • helena_88

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    i totally love this, it's so creepy and mysterious Mr. Green
    July 2nd, 2013 at 01:00pm
  • Quoth Raven

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    Okay I'm freaking out to see the next update! This is getting really good!
    July 2nd, 2013 at 07:27am
  • synystergirl

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    Oh please hurry and update - I'm hanging here waiting!!!!!
    July 2nd, 2013 at 05:28am
  • Synful Shadows

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    Shocked Officially scared right now. Seriously, that thing with the computer was some scary shit. And there's really no denying that there's something up with that house now. I do have to agree with Brian about talking to Gareth. I don't think it would really help, but maybe he will tell them something. Who knows? But I am wary of them splitting up. That always seems to be a bad thing in horror movies and stories. Great update!
    July 2nd, 2013 at 04:36am
  • shortygirl

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    Joseph, sounds like a weirdo...glad to finally see a update
    June 15th, 2013 at 10:12pm
  • rockstarsNredpants

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    Oh damn! This story is intense! I love it, can't wait for an update! :)
    June 15th, 2013 at 09:18pm
  • Zianna Chacitie

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    Stuff's about to get real now that they're realizing their situation :D I'm excited for this part loll. I love the suspense this story has and the plot is great. Hope for another update soon:)
    June 15th, 2013 at 12:14am