Kind of wondering why Gareth doesn't want them leaving the house? Seems weird. And the thing in Johnny's bathroom was creepy. I would NOT be sleeping in there, just saying. I wonder how long they'll shrug the weird stuff off though before they admit something weird is going on. Great update! :D
This is definitely an interesting story. I'm really excited to see where you take this. And I die (from the cute mental images) of the hamsters as "fat balls.". Update soon!
I find this story very interesting. It's sort of a different approach, or maybe that's just me. I really like that this house is sort of messing with them. I love mysterious haunted houses and this is just great.
I honestly can't wait to read what happens next, hopefully some action, but I'm sure I'll be satisfied with whatever occurs next. Its a good start, I like that it's not going super fast, that you're taking your time.
Kind of weird and cute that Matt and Liv both had that dream. I'm thinking it might mean something more later on? Hopefully! :D Though Liv kind of needs to abandon her feelings for Jason first. I just don't like that she keeps getting hurt because he doesn't feel the same. And of course the creep factor just keeps going up, now with Matt's stuff being moved and the hamsters getting aggressive. O.O Wonder what's going on there? Loved the update! :D
Oh and little note, "yesterday night" should actually be "last night."
That house is creepy, along with Gareth. O.O And the fact that they're being watched is making it even creepier. Though I felt bad for Liv again, though Matt's like the perfect best friend for her. Great update!
I was able to imagine it all, and that house seems really creepy. I got chills thinking about it. I love your details. Can't wait for the next chapter.
[comment swap] After reading the first couple of chapters, I've found this story to be quite good! I like the friendship dynamic you have going for your original character and I think your grammar and vocabulary are up to par. The only thing you need to work on are your commas. You're a bit comma happy, but other than that it's great!
The part where her mom was crying made me think of my mom. Happens every time I go on a trip without her haha. XD And of course she'd bring her hamsters with her. Kind of creepy how the gate closed and locked itself though. O.O Great update! :D
Matt and Liv's teasing is just awesome, I think they are so cute, hopefully this trip will bring them closer and she can get over her feelings for Jason. Cant wait for more! =)