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I have no idea who BTR is either!
I'm not a fan of teenage fanfiction because well, I'm way too old for that, but it's always nice to read something less heavy. Your writing is good, even if I'm not particularly interested in the plot but that's obviously just my own taste. Either way, the flow is pretty solid, your writing is easy to follow and I like that! Keep writing.

Monroe is such a pretty name! And I love the layout! I'm so glad her family is supportive of her. That's necessary sometimes if you are making such a big move at such a young age. I think you put up a pretty good start here.

I'm also from comment swap! I'll admit that I don't know who Big Time Rush are, but this fic was still flowing nicely and easy to understand. You write with a good ration of action to dialogue, and you give enough detail to tell the reader exactly what is happening! Keep up the good work!

Comment swap. Okay so i would never read this on my own. lol BUT it was really well done. Everything was spaced out evenly and your characters are distinguishable. This could definitely be another pop movie for sure with a cult following of tweens lol It's just overall very cute, but not fake, you know? There's a genuine quality something very homey and familiar about the set up of it all (Like i've seen it in a movie or something) lol very catchy, good job.

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So I don't really read a lot of big time rush fan fics but I really liked this. It's not your usual one and it looks like you have a great plot set up. I really liked your writting syle. It's easy to connect to and very down to earth. Good job!

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This isn't what I'd usually read on here, but I did enjoy it! I love your layout, it's simple yet so pretty. Your writing style is very nice, and everything flows so well together. I didn't see any mistakes. You've done a great job so far!

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So, this isn't the usual type of story I read, but I thoroughly enjoy this. You have really good grammar and it all flows together really well. You have really nice style and you get your point across. I would love to read more and I can't wait to see what direction you take this in. ^_^ Also, you have a nice layout that makes it easy to read which is definitely a major plus! (:

Comment swap brought me here; so glad it did!! It's rare finding decent writers of fan fictions (no offense to other writers)... I love this! I will say though that I've never been a fan of switching point of views in stories, but it's great so far. Will definitely keep reading. Go check my BTR FF out, if you want!!

loooooved it bekah :)

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I am glad it did too. Your story is good. The style you write with is nice and easy to read. I really enjoyed the storyline so far too! The back ground and font color complimented each other and made it easy to read as well.
Keep up the good work!

Hey, comment swap brought me here. I have no idea who this story is about (sadly) so my comment in that respect wont really mean diddly. However, I absolutely LOVE your layout! The background adds a very elegant touch to a classy picture and body section! very eye catching and catches my interest immediately. From what I read, your writing is very well done, very enjoyable to read.

Continue the great work! Good luck!

Hey comment swap brought me here. I am not a fan of big time rush at all and I wasn't excited to be given this story. But in all honestly I think the first chapter is awesome, I could see it being a origional but anyway. I lovee your use of descriptions and paragraphs. I have a huge thing with paragraphs I hate them being too short and too long but yours are the right size. Your writing is clear and easy to read, I had no problems with grammar but I don't really care for that type of thing unless it's atrotious (my spelling is really bad so I tend not to critize people for it) The layout is pretty cool but again I couldn't care less if there was no layout. I think it's a good start. Good luck with it. =)

Well these girls are definitely different. Ha ha. Im not a fan of big time rush though, i do love the story plot. The lengths are nice and so is the paragraph structure. I'd definitely keep reading. I hope you get the chance to update soon, maybe I can get used to all time rush. haha. :D

I really enjoy the juxtaposition of the two characters. You grammar and spelling was very good and I really didn't find any problems as far as sentence structure.

One thing I think would be really interesting for your story, is maybe play with the tones of the chapter. I've read some really great stories like that where the author has written the POVs so well that I literally thought there was two people writing their story. I think it would a challenge, and as a writer I always love challenging myself that extra little bit.

I really love the story and I cannot wait to read more.

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I really like what you've got so far, the plot you have used is very interesting! I don't beleive I found any spelling or grammar mistakes, which is always a good thing. Your a really good writer and I can't wait for an update :)

Keep writing and good luck

Uh oh, I hope Mrs. Collier isn't too bad. Good job! :)

I like it so far! Can't wait for the next update :)