The "You're Not Fat" Campaign - Comments

@ alison.wonderland
That's really interesting. It's so brave to write based on yourself <3

@ ironi1234
A lot of it is based off of my experiences and the experiences of one of my close friends. The hospital that Laura stays at and her experiences there very closely matches the hospital that I was in and what it was like for me.

@ alison.wonderland
That's sounds great too! I was getting kind of curious and if you don't mind me asking and everything, how much of this is fiction? Like is this about someone you know, or based of you or something? It's just written so realistically. You don't have to answer if you don't want to.

@ ironi1234
If I do write a sequel it'll be about Laura's journey through the process of recovery - outpatient, therapy, fixing her social and academic situations, and just getting her together in general. Rick doesn't have an ED. At all. No.

Aww I love you too! Yes please please please write another one! I love this do much! Isaw someone wrote something about writing one about manorexia than seemed pretty cool, just a idea. Anyway I'm sure it'll be amazing if you chose to

I like this, not only because you have a great writing style and its so relatable, but also sometimes with issues like eating disorders during the times someone actually does want help there's this feeling of aloneness and helplessness, so I think this story might actually help some people

Im actually so glad shes doing better now, i dont know i feel like how youve written this with so much feeling behind it i feel like i know laura and i actually do feel proud knowing shes doing better keep it up beautiful <3

I am so glad Laura wants to get better now /.\ You're doing great & love/hate this story but that's a good thing. Omg. Keep it up lovely.

I fangirl when you update. Like seriously.

You are doing this amazingly. I literally read this in one sitting without stopping, it was so thrillingly good. I love the way you write so realistically about Ana and Laura's feelings. You manage to describe the hospital in such a way that even those who haven't experienced it can relate to it. Keep up the great work and please please please don't stop writing this!!!

Ana's been a social little girl

I love this so much.

The only thing I didn't like about that chapter was the run-on sentences. They were kinda annoying

I quite like this story. It's in nice short chapters that also reflect the main character which I like. Everything seems realistic and plausible. I will admit it's not my favourite story or the best one but it's good and I think it's okay. Also you're not sugar-coating everything to make it seem better which I always look for in a story, I hate stories that are always happy.

It's so weird how powerful that last one was

@ alison.wonderland
You know when your reading a book, and something that you wouldn't have noticed, had it not been linked subtly to something in another part of the story, so it sticks out a little? Something like that.

Lo, honey, please just try </3

@ resplendently
More depth how? I'm not sure what you mean.

Hello. my name is Cassidy. Your story is quite relate-able, and I love it when you update. Your characters are very realistic, quite professionally written. However, your plot needs more depth. There is your constructive criticism.

Please no hate, I like the story, really, but she wanted constructive criticism.

i love this story so much. and it's all very relate-able. i cannot wait for the next chapters c: