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  • heeytara

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    This is really good keep writing
    August 17th, 2012 at 06:02pm
  • Kora1234

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    Omg I love it!! Keep updating!!!
    August 16th, 2012 at 05:15pm
  • LouellaBelle

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    Hello! Comment Swap. I really, really like this, I'm a big fan of All Time Low fan fictions. I think this could be really great, though there are some parts where it just gets a little bit slow. There were also some minor grammar errors, but otherwise it was great! I hope you continue!
    August 15th, 2012 at 04:02am
  • Mrs.Barakat

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    I love it!! Great job! (: I think that she should tell Alex her secret and then later the others find out and Jack and Alex both want to date her and they make her choose between the both of them? (: just an idea, <3
    August 9th, 2012 at 05:43am
  • love me always

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    oh my god i just fell completely in love please update soon
    :3
    August 8th, 2012 at 12:36am
  • love me always

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    oh my god i just fell completely in love please update soon
    :3
    August 8th, 2012 at 12:36am
  • alleson

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    ugh this is so good :3 update soon please :D
    August 7th, 2012 at 04:54am
  • krazy4gaskarth

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    this is awesome. the lyrics are amazing. cant wait for the next update :D
    August 7th, 2012 at 04:48am
  • forever_hustler

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    firstly this chapter is really good ! & I can't wait to see alex & her together in later chapters awwh ! & those lyrics are really good ! i'm glad you shared them with us (: update soon <3
    August 6th, 2012 at 07:20pm
  • Lt93

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    WAIT DO I SEE A DFTBA AT THE BOTTOM. *NERDFIGHTER SIGN*
    August 6th, 2012 at 06:24pm
  • alleson

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    loved this, the writing style is great and very realistic ! can't wait for the next update :D
    August 1st, 2012 at 08:12am
  • biancaxx5

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    Love it!!!!!! Xoxo
    July 31st, 2012 at 05:36am
  • crushcrushfaint

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    This story is AMAZING so far! Can't wait for the next update! :)
    July 30th, 2012 at 05:46pm
  • alicefromwonderland

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    this is really good so far :) Can't wait for more!
    July 29th, 2012 at 08:27pm
  • avadakedanielle

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    Great so far :)
    July 29th, 2012 at 08:50am
  • forever_hustler

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    ASDFGHJKL . i'm kinda in love with this story already sooooooo you should update soon <3
    July 29th, 2012 at 05:17am
  • Sophia Rayne

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    I really like it so far. :) The boys personalitys, yea, dead on. XD
    July 28th, 2012 at 09:15am
  • MaydayParade01

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    I LOVE this story so far. I can't wait for the next update.
    July 28th, 2012 at 05:49am
  • MaydayParade01

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    I LOVE this story so far. I can't wait for the next update.
    July 28th, 2012 at 05:48am
  • SammiRamsey6

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    I really really am liking this story so far, its got all the things i love in an ATL Fanfiction: them as teenagers, alex gaskarth, cutting, oh and i love the fact that they are neighbors:) please update soon.
    July 27th, 2012 at 01:20pm
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