What's So Good About Picking Up The Pieces? - Comments

Drei - The balance of dialogue and description is working for me. I think the bit at the beginning where Nicki describes how she finds the boys -collectively and individually- is really good. The moment between Alex and Nicki is superb, I like that she is opening up the teeny tiniest of bits. I also adore how Jack trips on the drum kit.

On to Chapter two; Alex's introduction line is perfect!!!!
I like that Nicki stays with the personality described in the first chapter: Relatively quiet. I like that everything the ATL boys are saying/doing, I can actually imagine them doing.

I approve of your first chapter :)
I like the almost... simplicity of this chapter. I notice most stories start off which full on plots, etc. The way that information about Nicki is fed through the writing is awesome!

thank you for updating, love this!

oh shit damn good!!~

that was realy good. cant wait for another chapter :D

update again soon bc this story is one of the best okay

I fucking love this! omg so many feels

@ love me always
haha thank you :)
And I actually haven't gone to Warped Tour, going there is my fricking dream, but I don't live in the States, I'm Asian :D so you my friend, are the lucky duck :D
There's actually an indoor festival coming up with those bands in March :D
The tickets were my birthday present since the show's 3 days before it haha :P
Thank you so much for supporting my story! Love you <3 *does hand heart sign thing*

oh my god amazing story :) and OH MY GOD YOU LUCKY SON OF A BITCH i'm jealous of you i got to see of mice&men at warped tour and also all time low at warped too but i never got to meet them ;~; you lucky duck

@ krazy4gaskarth
Haha thanks :D I'm really glad you like this :D haha :) And there's no need to be jealous, you just have to practice writing a lot! Trust me, in 6th grade, my writing was pretty bad (at least in my opinion) but my English teacher at the time helped me to improve a lot (mostly because I paid attention in class, now I've fallen asleep in English at least 3 times lol) Anyways, thank you SO MUCH for supporting the story! I'me really happy you liked it even if it's a filler :) New chapter probably next week since my family will be on holiday haha. Merry Christmas! :D <3 <3

omg ok wait ur in 7th grade? uh im jell i wish i could be as good a writer as u! and honestly in 7th grade you should aim for high grades but don't freak out over them. anyway this chapter is cute. i actually really liked it for a filler. <333 new chapter soon pleaseeeeee!

biancaaaa... moreee hahah :D

i love that you mentioned something from dan and phil omg that's great. anyway, love that you're updating again! i missed this story, can't wait to see where it goes :)

Laughed so hard when I recognized the Dan and Phil things:) The first thing i thought when i read Delia smith was actually Dan and phil..
I quite liked this filler actually. I really liked the Alex and cooking thing. they are learning a bit more about each other, which is good:) keep writing!!

@ krazy4gaskarth
hahah thanks :)
Glad to know they were missed by someone other than me :D

@ MaydayParade01
No problem :) You're kind of the reason I started writing again anyway haha :P

@ havefaitinme
Thank you so much! I plan on writing and updating tomorrow :)

@ AlisonTimeLow
I fangirled at your comment :D

I fangirled at the pancakes