yeah the older chapters were moved here from my quizilla account and 2 person was popular there at that time. hadn't gone back to fix that yet. :) thank you.
Pretty good story. I did notice that you switched perspectives sometimes. You know, from her to you. But that isn't serious. Other than that, good job.
I LOVE LOVE LOVE that ending. a little sad that he gave his life for them all but it just showed how much he loved her. I gotta say, I got a little misty through that chapter
Oh. I hope there is more. I want to see the baby and them have them meet up forever in death. I know that is horrible but they belong together, I think anyway. Love the story and what you did with it. I cant wait to see what you do with the next chapter, unless that was it.