So, I think I just fell in love with your story. It's beautifully written so far. (: There's a few spelling errors here and there, but never really bothers me. I'm intrigued to see how this plays out now. <3 Update when you can.
hey this is a very good story so far and i cant wait for the update.. he is going to be so shocked that she is only sixteen. cant wait to see what happens.. update