I really like this story, even though I'm not really one for My Chem fanfics, or fanfics in general, however, i thought yours was really well written. I thought that you had a good amount of plot twists, like the ones regarding Maddie and Lyn-Z, and that this is a very creative and imaginative story. I do think that this story wold really benefit from some more editing, as you have many minor mistakes and awkward sentences, that could be easily fixed to enhance the charm of this story. Overall, wonderful job!
Omg I love this!!!! The story line and everything:3 on vampire's and werewolves is amazing! Your writing is so unqiue and different! I litarally love this! Its different from other mcf fanfics and I have to agree with SoWrongItsLottie that its different! Please write more<3
Just a quick note to say that I was brought to your story via Comment Swap. Now, I don't normally read My Chemical Romance fics, like ever but...this one, actually surprised me. It's true that you wrote it on vampires and werewolves mostly like a couple of fics that I've seen but your one is different, just the way that you've written this one is incredible! Your writing is unique and original and you have a good layout that doesn't distract you too much from the story. Great job on this :D