AWE. I always did love this story, it's just so cute. I really do love the update and km crazy happy that Louie and Tori are starting over. & Alexis and Harry are just too cute :) update again soon love.
Hey sorry I took forever to comment... but here i am. Now I like the idea of this story it's a good idea your writing talent is great easy to read and follow. Your first two chapters were good but as a few people have said I found the third chapter to be a little to quick they haven't really spoken about anything before she starts yelling at him and vice versa. I think if you just tweaked this chapter a little, slowed down the pace it would be even better then it is now. But other then that it is a good story, you have a talent so keep up the good work :)