the first chapter was sooo good it gripped me in already! I really loved your art work it fitted the theme sooo well! so simple! I'll probably subscribe after I get to finish the second chapter! So good luck on your future comments because it think it was an amazing read! and if you could let me know what you think of my book Into the Redwoods We Go that would be sweet! :) And let me know what you think! and add me if you want to talk! :)
So I lied and decided to leave a comment anyways because I'm crafty plus I like that face.
But awwwwww, the banner was back when he had his old hair, omg! I love Louis to the end of the universe and back, I swear he's amazing. I like the layout. I love how Louis was just like, ". . . what are you doing here omg didn't I jam my tongue down your throat once anyways oh hey lads this is my old friend heh."
Gotta love Lou. Anyways what will happen when they "catch up"? ;) HMMMM.
I like this, but I think them reuniting was a bit too fast. Of course he would recognize her and all, but she seems to have fallen straight back into how they were. If he stopped all communication two years ago, should she be holding a strong grudge and completely push him away?
Eeepps! And so they met after losing contact for two years. I agree with xomrsmalikox below: why did Louis stop contacting Tori while he was in X-Factor?