Picking up the Pieces - Comments

I'm glad she killed Jake xD She is so badass! Can't wait for more

I need more. MORE MORE! <3

That sounds dark and twisted.. And like there is a bad out come just waiting to happen.. Freaking Rachel.. Should get blacklisted from all society at the least or get some sense knocked into that shellfish being of hers.. Argh.. I hope she can evolve into an actual good person... Hmm.. Good chapter.

I wonder how much of a drama queen Jake is.. That might be funny.. Or creepy as hell.. Batwoman.. Hmm.. Catwoman.. Hmm.. Wonder if she'll do something like that. Good chapter.

Love the update! Can't wait for more!

Yay, another great chapter! I'm glad Bruce has realised! Update soon!:)

About damn time Rachel got knocked down a little. I hope the verbal back slap will give her a little more sense.. But probably not, since she has yet to change from her teenage self.. Hmm.. Good chapter.

my god i want to rip rachel's eyes out wit a piece of tofu!!!i was waiting for so long T.T so close, so close

So his attempt may be ruined by Rachel? Or?? Hmm.. Good interesting story. Looking forward to more.

FINALLY FINALLY YES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

haha oh dear! so close!! MORE soon please!

I love this story(:!!!!

Yay!!! :) Bruce finally admitted it!! About damn time. I think this Jake guy is a loser.

and Bruce finally hit a breakthrough and admitted it too himself.. thought he needed a slap for that xD I wonder how this will go. I don't think it's too late, Jake is being stupid and with a little wooing, I think things will start flowing or something.. good chapter

FINALLY!! about time Bruce! More soon!!

FINALLY!! about time Bruce! More soon!!

YES YESSSS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! finally yes i knew it

gosh another great chapter! :)

I adore this story, the writing is wonderful and everything just fits so nicely together! It's a bit odd to have Rachel be so imperfect, but I think I'm adjusting to it and loving it :) Keep up the good work and update soon!

You have to update soon!