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  • marina2351

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    OMG continue please its amazing! <3 love your writing its so...wow, BRAVO.
    August 8th, 2012 at 02:50am
  • JustThinking

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    Alfred the matchmaker... His career isn't going to well on that front so far. I wonder what you have planned for this and just who Bruce will pick (so to speak). Her or Rachel... Hmm.. Good chapter. Smile
    August 7th, 2012 at 11:30pm
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    i want to know what she did come on tell meeeeeee
    August 7th, 2012 at 10:24pm
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    come on plez update soon im dying over here
    August 7th, 2012 at 07:41pm
  • A7Xfan505

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    This is awesome!! :) I love it!
    August 6th, 2012 at 07:31pm
  • pinkpanther012895

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    I don't like Rachel either. I can't wait until Bruce stops being an idiot.
    August 6th, 2012 at 04:07am
  • anime_band

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    plez don't make Rachel know don't don't don't i don't like her
    August 6th, 2012 at 02:40am
  • Space Juju

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    ohhh! This is gonna get good! I don't think she should know. No saving Gotham for miss Rachel.
    August 6th, 2012 at 01:37am
  • Rosabellee

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    Ahh! I hope that Bruce soon finds out about Adrienn and Jake! I would love to see Adrienn and Bruce together in the future, but that's all up o you, i guess? :)
    August 6th, 2012 at 01:10am
  • JustThinking

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    I'm not sure bitchy and diva like rachel should know the secret. But maybe still have her helping in cleaning up Gotham. If that makes sense at all. Anyways, so Alfred is worried about his plan failling? Maybe he should. But then again... Jake is a crane.. Hmm... Idk. Good chapter. Smile
    August 6th, 2012 at 12:33am
  • Space Juju

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    I don't like Rachel xD but nice of her to find someone nice for Adrienn. More soon!
    August 5th, 2012 at 08:23pm
  • JustThinking

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    Okay, so new to the story. I really like it so far. It has a good writing style, it's well written. The characters, both new and the known ones are believable, very well build up and I like his they interact with one another. I like the events and the plot line so far. It works and all in all I simply like this story. Subscribing and looking forward to more. Smile
    August 5th, 2012 at 04:29pm
  • lumosmancer

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    wow this is amazing! More people need to read this:) update soon!
    August 4th, 2012 at 11:30pm
  • Space Juju

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    More soon please!
    August 3rd, 2012 at 01:15am
  • anime_band

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    i still love it and cant wait to see what he wants
    August 2nd, 2012 at 01:24am
  • Space Juju

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    What happened to her two years ago, I wonder?? Love the chapter, can't wait for more
    August 2nd, 2012 at 12:55am
  • anime_band

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    i am addicted to this sorry one of my favorit story's ever!!!!!!!!!!!! i need the next update soooo bad keep going
    August 1st, 2012 at 08:36am
  • anime_band

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    i love the lay out it fits the story now plezzz update i love this story sooo much!!!!!
    July 31st, 2012 at 07:59pm
  • Peace_Love_Jonas

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    Very interested! Keep it coming!!
    July 31st, 2012 at 08:31am
  • anime_band

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    love it i love love love it keep going
    July 31st, 2012 at 06:20am
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