Far From Home - Comments

Hi I'm really sorry but I have been asked to comment swap this story so it will just be the same comment as below. Sorry. Hi, this story is amazing and I was so drawn in my the first chapter. I really enjoyed the idea of travelling between worlds and the storyline of it so unique. I was fascinated by the part where you described how the man looked through her mind, you captured the memories and the pain amazingly and I honestly cannot wait for more :)

Hi, this story is amazing and I was so drawn in my the first chapter. I really enjoyed the idea of travelling between worlds and the storyline of it so unique. I was fascinated by the part where you described how the man looked through her mind, you captured the memories and the pain amazingly and I honestly cannot wait for more :)

First of all let's just get this out of the way I love your layout I have to say I was a bot disappointed only because it made me feel like I was about to read a Wicked Lovely Fan Fiction which is my favorite series but before I ever knew about Wicked Lovely I was in love with Harry Potter (The series that is) and I instantly got happy again. I like the idea of going from one world to another because ir reminds me of Kingdom Hearts which is my favorite game so I'll definitely be reading more of this.

I love this so so so so much. Andrea is amazinh and I love the depth you've given her character and how you've pretty much captured the personality of the Harry Potter characters so far. I didn't read the summary so from the first rwo chapters I was expecting an amazing horror but this is just as good, if not better! I loved how you made Andrea's character so rational. It's different. I adore this story and will continue to follow it's progress.

It's always a pleasure when comment swap sends me to a Harry Potter story. I nerd out so hardcore for that shit. The summary immediately drew me in. The storyline is so original and it's refreshing for it to not be about one of the main characters. I loved reading this and I can't wait to read more.

Sent from Comment swap! I will say that I don't really care for Harry Potter works here, but this was very good! It's always nice to see some really descriptive parts in any story and you did that very well in this one! I could all but feel the emotions in the memories, very attention grabbing writing you had going on in here and I was all the way interested!

Please update soon! :) I enjoy the beginning here!

Sent from comment swap. This is interesting, I have to say. I do find it a little unbelievable that Andrea is living on her own at 17, or maybe I'm missing something? You're writing is very descriptive, though, which is a good skill to have. Just watch for a few grammar errors and missing quotation marks.

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There was a lot of information in the last chapter, but it made very interesting. It kept me very focused(I'm a very unfocused reader.) I especially like the part where you described how the man looked through her mind, you captured the memories and the pain perfectly. I found one very minor mistake(you wrote I when the rest of the story is in third person) but overall I really like this. I am in no shape or form a Harry Potter fan, but you really captured my attention on this. Well done!

I was sent here from comment swap and I'm really glad that it brought me to this story. I'm a huge Harry Potter fan and I've been looking for a good read and then I see this one just starting. This story immediately captures my attentions and you get sucked into the story so fast. It's well written and the layout is easy on the eyes for people that are myopic. I'm going to read this story over and over. I really enjoyed it and I hope you continue writing for you are a very talented writer.

Hello I got sent here from Comment Swap. I gotta say this seems really good so far and I really like it. Which is weird because Im not that big of a Harry Potter fan at all and yet I could not stop reading this story. So hooraayy for you for getting me hooked on a harry potter story.

Anyways this is writen really well and I hope you keep it up, I would hate to see you to give up on this. Good luck and keep up the good work!

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OMG. Okay, so right now I'm loving your story. Big Harry Potter fan right here!!! You're idea is very original and creative. I don't think there are other Harry Potter fan-fictions out there about being transported throught time and into that world. It's just wow. I think your story is really well written and there isn't any major spelling problems. So kudos. Anyway, I'm subscribing. I can't wait to see what will happen :)

So, I really do love this story and cannot wait for you to update, but comment swap just keeps sending me here, and I don't know why! So, yeah, read my original comment, blahblahblah and all that fun stuff. :]

Comment swap can be a beautiful thing. Admittedly it can also be a crap thing when you get shown really badly written stories, but all can be forgiven when you read one like this! Was thoroughly excited when I saw that this was a Harry Potter fic (being a potterhead myself) and even more excited when I started to read, and it actually sounded good...

Now, good is an understatement. Really, really enjoyed reading this, cannot wait to read the next installment! Have recommended and subscribed, as this is one of THE best fics I've ever had the pleasure to read. It has the perfect balance of drama and humour, where the idea of a girl waking up in bed with 'Alan Rickman' holding a wand is completely ludicrous to the point of amusement, but then the drama and tension of the idea is still there, knowing that something is clearly wrong.

One thing I did notice is this: "The man – I refused to call him Severus Snape – didn’t respond." in chapter 3, I think. The rest of the story is written in third person, and then this suddenl jumps to first person. It should really be: "Andrea refused to call him Severus"

Thats the only grammatical mistake I could find, and it is really really fantastically (is that a word?) written.

Thoroughly enjoyed, keep it up! :D

Comment swap sent me here again. Don't know why. Just read my original comment about how awesome this story is!

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So, this is a little confusing. The plotline is just... a little too much for me, I really didn't follow for some reason. It is original, yes, but... Idk something about it bothers me a little. Although, it is very well written and you truly have a talent for writing, I'll give you that. Not enjoying the plot doesn't mean I didn't enjoy the writing per se. Also, the fact that there's so much going on in the layout makes it feel weird, I mean, all those famous people, it makes one think it's gonna be a fanfiction about everyone...

This is....Oh, my god....I can't even..... My mind is blown. I love comment swap for bring me here. Normally the stories I get are beyond annoying or just eh, but this was neither. It is amazing, and original, and funny, and SO WELL WRITTEN. I am subscribing. NOW.

Okay so it looks like the Comment Swap sent me here twice in a row so basically just ignore this and just read what I said in the first comment that I left because really that's all I had to say about it.

Okay so it looks like the Comment Swap sent me here twice in a row so basically just ignore this and just read what I said in the first comment that I left because really that's all I had to say about it.

All i can really say is that I didn't know what to expect after I had read the summary, but it turned out...no as I had first imagined. This is surely an idea I never would have thought of myself, and I've never read anything like it in all of the Harry Potter stories I have gone through here on mibba.