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this story is really interesting. i'm a huge potter head and in the last chapter i love how Andrea thought she was talking to Alan Rickman. It's a really interesting idea and for sure something i haven't read before which is saying a lot! i'm really interested to see where this story is going. definitely subscribing :)

[comment swap] First off, I really like your summary. It seems like a lot of information, but the way its written and what it entails just sounds so interesting and has me wanting to read the dirt chapter... Which is always a good thing. I really like the first chapter. It's not boring and holds my attention throughout. I kind of like Andrea so far, though I don't know much about her. She seems like a no nonsense type of person. I think you did a great job of writing her mother... Her mom just says all of those typical mom things, and its well done. So, I'm going to stop with the second chapter, just because I'm on my phone and its hard to type a lot, but I really like this so far. Just the way you write and describe things is extremely well done. I think you have a unique same fantastic story idea right here, and I truly hope it goes well.

Not really a big fan of harry potter but i will say this very well written. made me actually somewhat like harry potter for once. I also like the layout you chose. Did you create the banner yourself? it looks very done. anyways great story!

Sorry the rest of my last comment got cut off. Anyways, it's so different and has such an original flare. I like how it's mixed between the muggle and wizard world. It's so well written which makes me wanting to read it more (I'm typically not too intersted in the spin-offs) but you have me hooked! Keep updating and keep up the good work!!

So far with what I've read I find it so interesting! Your writing leaves me wanting more, kudos! Grammar and spelling is so amazing. I'm jealous! Keep up the good work, I love this!!

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Hey! :) So I really enjoyed this story; the writing was in a lovely style and the story plot was an interesting original spin-off :) Your spelling is amazing and your grammar impeccable. As I’ve said, the way you write is lovely to read and is relatable to the readers (as much as possible :P) So, keep up this amazing story and remember that you write for your enjoyment before others! :)

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At last, a fanfic with a totally original, really imaginative, slightly crazy but completely believable idea! I like the way you incorporated the real world with the magic world, it's almost like a fanfic within a fanfic, if you see what I mean! This story is such a great idea, written well, and it made me chuckle! My suggestion: Custom layout!

This is a very original plotline, and I must say you write quite excellently. I didn't see any real grammar or spelling mistakes, so bravo to you! Usually I don't like alternate-reality fics for Harry Potter (usually the characters are a plethora of Mary Sues running around like chickens without heads) but this is perfectly balanced and supremely plotted. Can't wait to see where this goes!

Wow. Amazing so far :3 I really like it,love how you mixed it up. Can't wait for the next post. So glad comment swap brung me here :D

This is such an interesting take on a HP Fanfic. Mixing the muggle world with the wizardy like that is incredibly differnt. It's so origional, I really like that. There's something that confused me though. "Raindrop after raindrop would fall from the darkly cloudy skies" Darkly cloudy? I'm not sure if this is a typo or intentional but it just seems wrong I guess. Should it be "Raindrop after raindrop would fall from the dark cloudy skies" ? If not, I'm sorry it just weirded me out a bit. Other than that I'm really excited to read more!

Yaaay I'm so happy to get a Harry Potter for comment swap. This story is EXTREMELY interesting. I absolutely love how you mixed our world with theirs. Your writing is beautiful and I can't wait to read more. I'm subscribing

Comment Swap~. Well, for starts this was not how I thought it would be. It was different from the other Harry Potter fanfics that I have read through comment swap. Good job on that. To me this story is more original than all the other ones I've read. I love how it's not about being a wizard, but being brought into the wizarding world. Good job and keep writing. It sounds like it could turn into a very interesting story.

Comment swapper here. I personally love Harry Potter but I wouldn't consider myself a "Potterhead." I think this plot is extremely original. You have a really great start. Your write beautifully. One recommendation would be to add a layout. It really helps enhance your story. But great job!

Your suchh a talented writer! I'm not a huge fan of Harry Potter but the way you write intruiged me so I gave it a try and I'm glad I did! Can't wait for the next chapter:)

The summary sounded interesting, so I was intrigued to read the story and was not disappointed :) your writing has a nice flow which makes it easy and enjoyable to read, especially since I love Harry potter, so I was pleased when comment swap gave me this. Your characterisation is very good too, you really get a sense of the characters personalities. Interested to see where you go with this - well done! :)

I keep saying that comment swap has this strange way of always sending me to HP fictions, even though I'm not even a fan of them...
But I read yours and I thought you had a really original idea. I Never saw Any story when someone would go back in time and meet Tom Riddle, so I give you props for that :)
The only mistake I found was in the second chapter. I believe you made some confusion with the girls names because you wrote 'Andrea looked back and saw Andrea...' i know it's not written that way, but I didn't go back to quote it, sorry :/
Other than that, you did a good job :)

Hello. :) Well, comment swap brought me here and I checked the info but I didn't read the chapters. I'm not a harry potter fan so this didn't work out. I believe your story is well written and with interesting descriptions since everyone seems to like it. So the only thing I have left to say is don't give up on writing and share your imagination with your fans. That's all, bye. :)

I got this off of comment swap and I must say this is an amazing story! I love the plot and the idea, its just sooo original!! I am super eager to find out what happens next sooo I am definately subscribing and not to mention recommending!!! Thank you for giving Mibba such an awesome story!!!

Oh my gosh! I've been waiting for comment swap to give me a story like this, I'm a HUGE Potterhead and when I saw Harry's name in the summary I didn't even bother reading it, I just went straight to the story. I am definelty subscribing and recommending this! Your writing is great, there was one mistake in the first chapter, when one of your characters was speaking (I can't remember who) the end of the sentence was missing a speech mark and a full stop. But other than that this story is amazing!! I cannot wait to see what happens, I'm really interested to see who took her! I keep picturing it as Hagrid, but it could be someone else. I'm also interested to find out why the HP books were published if the story was real, like, is J K Rowling a secret witch? ;) love it! Haha this is the longest comment I've ever written on anyone's story xD Anyway, keep up the good work, I'll be waiting for an update :D

Comment swap.

This is a unique idea. I hope you will explain why she was taken in the first place.

I think one of the best parts of this, is the fact that you get to make it all up. You can change whatever you like, and no one can tell you that you're wrong.

The only mistake I really was was in the second chapter, Sharon’s lack of a new argument ment Andrea it should be meant not ment. That's really all that I caught.

Another tip of advice, make a layout, or even take one from the shared layouts. It makes the story more interesting and personal.