Love your story! And the fact that Greta and Kris still make appearances! If you decide to write another story it should totally be about Jordan finding himself a decent girl in the 'burgh! :D
I love how Max and Jord are still in this, great players & people.... Makes me love them even more anyways, I don't know what's gonna happen next, but I know this: I LOVE THIS STORY!!!! keep writing, you have soooo much talent!!! Amazing details that paint a picture in my head. I love it!!!! Keep updating!!!!