Blackbird, Fly - Comments

Ohhh my gosh!!!!! I just found this story today and read the entire thing in one sitting!! It's fucking AMAZING, I have no words!! I absolutely love how much of a psychopath Lux truly is and how much control he has over Charlie! I also love how she is super scared and afraid of him but also has a weird need to be around him! I honestly hope you consider updating this sorry and continuing it because i LOVE it and need to know what happens next!!

oh my god this was an absolute emotional rollercoaster WHY DIDN'T I SEE THIS STORY BEFORE

I was automatically interested in her and Lux's relationship and how his personality has two sides. The way you write it makes it feel so real. I felt terrified for her when she was on the run and he was slashing throats left and right to get to her. Honestly, I'm sat here shuddering. Perfection. So glad comment swap brought me here

i completely forgot about this site, and i just got back on today and this is the first thing i read and omg i forgot how AMAZING this story is. and how much i missed it. i seriously can not wait for another update! pls don't take a year with this one as well :p

WHERE. WHERE HAS THIS BEEN ALL MY LIFE.

I've missed this story so much! I'm glad it's back. And I am terrified for her. She was so close but he has her again, oh my GOD. Please update soon!

Holy crap she was so close!

Wanted to comment and tell you that I really enjoyed reading this. I rarely read anything on Mibba but this is one of the few instances where the psychopath "love" relationship archetype is done properly. It was very refreshing to read.

OMG... This is so creepy in the most amazing way. Super addicted to this story!!!

This is amazing.
I literally have goosebumps.

i'm dying without this story, i need a update!

Just as I knew I would, I LOVE THE GAME. LOVE IT.

You know how much I love your stories! They're just so flawless! The update was awesome, it kept me on my toes the whole time! I hope she can actually get away to get help though...=/

EEEP! XD

when i saw you updated this, i almost squealed with joy. it seems like i've been waiting forever! and it was well worth the wait. this chapter was soooooo good. it's good to see lux and charlie actually having a relationship. and lux is still as sexy as ever. and i cannot wait for the next chapter. i'll probably check like every day lol.
and you read the hush, hush series too? pretty much the best books ever! i LOVE them. you should really read the nightshade series. best book series i've ever read.

HOLY MOTHER OF MOSES IT HAS BEEN FOREVER! Well worth the wait though. I can't wait for the game to begin. CAN. NOT. WAIT. <3

Number one: best chapter yet. Number two: BEST SONG EVER! Oh my God. If I wasn't so friggen tired from work I would leave a better comment, but I can't think. So all I can say is that I love, love, love this and I can not wait for the next chapter!

I love the newest chapter. and the dangerous passion charile and Lux hold. Perfect.

oh... and... I LOVE THAT SONG! Breaking Benjamin KICKS ASS!

this chapter was beautiful. this entire story is beautiful. in a sick, twisted way, of course. it's completely different from every other story i've read. all stories like this i've read are so much more perverse and violent and a litte bit ridiculous. i think you've done a fantastic job making this story not seem to crazy or outlandish. it's really perfect. definitely my favorite story i've ever read on mibba. i wish i could write like you. your words are freaking amazing. and how you bring such life to your characters, is crazy. like i don't care if lux is a psychopath, crazy murderer, he is damn sexy. and for once i don't hate the main girl in the story. ah, i'm so in love with this story that i don't even have the words for it. so please, just keep updating. i hope this serves as a motivation for you!

The first thing that popped into my head at the end of this chapter: and so it begins. PERFECT chapter! I love how she was yelling at herself after her left. She knows exactly what he's doing, and yet she's struggling not to fall into it. So perfect. Can't wait for the next <3

Wow! This is amazing!

Awesome!!
Write more soon : )