Just read the first chapter... I had to re-read and re-read to understand it all. damn. I feel like Albert Einstein now. They haven't taught me that shit in high school yet.
im a little late on reading this update but im so excited you updated!!! Im glad oli and amanda are gonna show delilah how much of a bitch she is! im so excited for this :D
Can I just marry your story? Haha. Wow, I definitely didn't see that one coming! Their plan is way more cunning that I would have thought up. I'm not sure how I feel about Amanda and Alex, though. I see where you're getting at, though, and I seriously cannot wait to see it unfold. :)
well fuck i cant wait to see how this all unravels! olivers plan is really interesting to me but i have the feeling that it wont go perfectly the way it was planned... especially that they keep reassuring each other idk but obviously they would do that haha. either way, you never seem to disappoint and i cant wait to see what happens! (-:
So, as I always point out, fucking awesome chapter ;) I'm loving the plan that Oliver came up with (admittedly, that was more cunning than anything I conjured up, haha), but I'm going to be an annoying fan for a moment and say that I'm torn with Amanda "swaying" Alex. Please don't get me wrong; I realize the initiative to get Delilah back is vital to this story, and I don’t think there’s any better form of vengeance that could be placed on her and Menlo. But… after putting something so beautiful about Oliver wanting her heart to be his forever and vise-versa, I don’t want to think about Amanda flirting and getting Alex to fall in love with her. Ugh, please, someone tell me they feel the same, haha! In all seriousness though, I cannot wait to see Oliver’s plot unfold in the oncoming chapters. Also, I was so happy to see a new update today. I haven’t had the best week, and reading this chapter made me feel a lot better <3
Did I detect the hint of future Oli smut?! Please say it's true! In regards to this update, it was absolutely fantastic. The plan is simply brilliant and I can't wait to see how it unfolds. Oliver's quite the mastermind and it's sexy as hell, I must admit.
ohmygod i loved literally everything about this chapter; amanda and oliver's thoughts on society, happiness, money and life in general, their plan to teach menlo a good lesson and of course, the ending was fucking brilliant. you are such a smart person and writer, the way you write is incredible. and, to be honest, the parts about society made me think a lot. so thank you, that was a great chapter! :-)
"At one point in the midst of it all, as he held himself over my body, he placed his palm over the right side of my chest, just above my heart, and whispered into my lips, “I want this to be mine forever.” He directed my own hand to flatten against his chest. “...because this will be yours forever.” That was so adorable! You're an amazing writer?
OMG! I just saw that you updated and I immediately rushed over! I love how you kept referring Delilah to Daisy. The Great Gatsby is seriously one of my all time favorite books! I'm just seriously in an awe because of your story. It's just too perfect for words! I can't wait to see how Oliver and Amanda get back at all of them! Keep up the fantastic work!
Okay. Okay. It took me a few minutes to get my thoughts together besides...Wow. Woah.
This has to be in the top five list of things I've ever read. Not top five fan fictions, but things I've ever read, period. Your writing, this story, everything...it's so brilliant.
The thought provoked from this is so amazing. I feel like I'm actually using my knowledge when I'm actively contemplating the point of life along with them. There are parts that make me feel incredibly uneducated (especially the chemistry bits; my one high school class still gives me nightmares) but generally I'm just in awe.
Amanda and Oliver are so beautiful. Oliver, in particular, with his brain and his family, is so devastatingly beautiful.
What I like most, I think (and this is hard to figure out because I like all of it - LOVE all of it) is that they're all so decidedly flawed. Amanda with her oblivion, Oli with his anger and his drugs - they're perfect because they are incredibly deep, 3-dimensional characters, falling into a deep, all-consuming love. It's just...sigh.
I am so in love with this and possibly in love with you and I hope you continue writing this story. Or just writing in general, because it's just goddamn brilliant.
As always; FUCKING WHOA. You're just so amazing. Like I don't even know what else to say. The Great Gatsby is my absolute favourite book, and I've intended on seeing the movie, but haven't gotten the chance yet :/ Hopefully I'll get it on DVD when it comes out! I loved the reference to the book, because, as I said before, it's at the top of my list :) The depths you take your chapters absolutely astonishes me. I don't know how you do it! You're honestly a brilliant writer, and hope you're planning to continue onto more serious ventures in the future; I think you could be a best-selling author, if you tried. I can't wait for the next update, dear!
That chapter... was absolutely brilliant, astonishing, and so well put together. I loved The Great Gatsby reference, and how in-depth you went with describing its reason for placement. Your chapter made me think of in a sense, how similar Amanda's relationship with Delilah is with some of the people that I had been friends with in the past, and how much I can relate to the "wasted mind" statement. I cannot express how much I enjoy this story, and how I look forward to every update of it. I feel such a colossal surge of emotion with every word I read, and how I have the ability to further understand Amanda and Oliver's thoughts, feelings, and relationship with every new update. I hope you plan to pursue a career in writing, because this story is truly a work of art. Already looking forward to the next chapter!
That chapter... was absolutely brilliant, astonishing, and so well put together. I loved The Great Gatsby reference, and how in-depth you went with describing its reason for placement. Your chapter made me think of in a sense, how similar Amanda's relationship with Delilah is with some of the people that I had been friends with in the past, and how much I can relate to the "wasted mind" statement. I cannot express how much I enjoy this story, and how I look forward to every update of it. I feel such a colossal surge of emotion with every word I read, and how I have the ability to further understand Amanda and Oliver's thoughts, feelings, and relationship with every new update. I hope you plan to pursue a career in writing, because this story is truly a work of art. Already looking forward to the next chapter!
that was such a great update! i loved how we discovered quite a few things (who had vandalised her house, who delilah really is...) you make every one of your chapters unique and awesome, i love it!