I'll Be Okay - Comments

Wow that was amazing to read. It was just so intense and I loved it. It started and ended perfectly. So glad they told each other they love one another. Really keen to see what happens now.

Aww love what he said about her in the interview... what a b***h that Rachel is xxx

Aww that was so super cute. It sucks that he is going away so early into the relationship but I'm really excited to see how you write this

Awww that was beautiful. I am so glad you wrote about Rose. It was great to read about their friendship. I am so glad they are officially together. Keen for the next chapter.

Loved the chapter... glad that he finally asked her out xxx

Aww I loved that chapter. I am so glad they are at least sort of together. Danny needs to hurry and ask her thats for sure. So keen for more.

Danny is so sweet to her. I love the way he looks after her. Can't wait for more.

I'm really excited about this date coming up. I'm glad she is staying with Danny.

I'm glad she realised. I am excited to see where things go from here.

Just found this story and I'm now up to date. I love it and I really hope you update soon. Can't wait to see what happens next.

I just found this story and I'm in love, please update soon.

This story has made my day so amazingly great! You need to update soon!

I really don't like Aunt Janette... she doesn't seem to understand that she's makng things worse rather than better by acting the way she is. Hopefully Lindsey will move out before her aunt drives her to do something stupid again xx

I really love this story !! I've read it in one shot! <3 This is the kind of story I love to read, plus, it's with Danny. ^^ This chapter is really nice. I'm really happy to see that at least, she smiles at him. It's a good start. Can't wait to see what'll happen next. xx

Loved the last few chapters... glad that Danny's getting her out of her shell x

@ lozzieee dwarf.
Thankyou! And i know, i'm used to writing First Person but i wanted to try out Third. Clearly i'm not very good, haha, so i might go through this story and make it back into First Person. It's much easier for me to write that way. Thanks for the feedback!

This is rather good; I like the premise. I'm a massive McFly fangirl myself and have written a fair few McFly fanfictions in my time.

However. You jump between tenses quite frequently, making the narrative structure quite confusing to follow. Your grammar's a little off too. I love your layout though :)

Loved the first two chapters... I can't wait to read more update soon please x