Daydream Away - Comments

this is my favorite fic ever and it just breaks my heart every time and I just love everything about this. good job :)

First, I like the summary. I feel that it draws the reader fairly quickly. I also enjoyed the flow of the story. I felt that it was worded really well, particularly the dialogue. The dialogue between Josh and Dan sounded very realistic. The end of this was really bittersweet. I was happy that Josh remembered what happened, but really disappointed that nothing else could happen between them. I think the ending really enhanced the story as a whole, though. The only con-crit I have is that you proofread this a little more thoroughly as there are some grammatical mistakes and typos. Good job with this though.

This is amazing. Agh I love it!

your writing is incredible. i love how each verse of the song has its own section of the story, like a little mini chapter. even though i've never listened to All Time Low before, i would say this is a really great (yet sad!) story, excellently written. it is beautiful.

you write incredibly well! i love how you put a verse between each section, like a little mini chapter. this is a great story, even though i haven't listened to All Time Low before. beautiful story:)

this is ridiculously cute!

Thank you very much! I'm planning on doing a chaptered flintceschi fiction, which will (hopefully) have a happy ending :)

Argh! Why are your fics so brilliant, yet so frustrating! No-one has a happy ending! Poor Dan, poor Josh.....:( It was really good, though.