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  • han jisung xx

    han jisung xx (100)

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    Comment swap brought me to this story. Its a really good story. Very well written and hardly any grammar mistakes. I'm excited to see what happens when she meets Ron. I love the plot and how it's Hermoine side of the story. I'll recommend and subscribe to this. Good job!
    August 9th, 2012 at 09:49pm
  • Annabelle Graceton

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    This is really good! A few small, grammatical errors here and there, but other wise really well done. It's interesting seeing Hermoine's side of the story and I'm looking forward to hearing her thoughts when she meets Ron and Harry :) And the troll scene, I am so looking forward to that! And meeting Malfoy! Ahh I'm just so excited to read more of this now and I'm so sad that there are only three chapters so far! I really hope that you update this soon because I honestly cannot wait to find out what happens next! From one Potterhead to another, great job! Update soon please! :)
    August 9th, 2012 at 07:41pm
  • slytherinbyatch

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    Awwwh I love it! It's really good, the bit with Hermione and her mum made me tear up a little! Really sweet, and really believable :')

    Although, I found two mistakes in this chapter, firstly you said that Hermione "realised that she was no the one who stood out" when she has just arrived in Diagon Alley, obviously the 'no' needs a t haha :) And in the last few lines, after the bookkeeper tells Hermione she can have a free book you've written 'minuets' instead of minutes :P

    Don't mean to critise, just thought I'd say so you can correct it! :D

    Really enjoying it, can't wait to read about Hermione's experience in Ollivander's! :D <3
    August 6th, 2012 at 03:03pm
  • blinkblinklover

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    Okay, so comment swap brought me here. I am the biggest fan of Harry potter fan fiction. If you like it, check out mine. You would probably enjoy it. This story is great. It definitely gives off the younger Hermione vibe, all innocent and good. I also loved loved loved the plot. Keep on going!
    August 5th, 2012 at 07:17am
  • glisssunseeker

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    You gotta love how calm Hermione is: "Could you set the television on fire?" Hahahaha.

    Keep it up ^_^
    August 4th, 2012 at 05:00pm
  • slytherinbyatch

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    LOVE IT, YOUNG HERMIONE IS SO CUTE! (think I'm getting the hang of this mibba malarky by the way Wink ) haha
    August 4th, 2012 at 01:21am
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