Thank you. I'm not sure exactly where its going to go. I know certain things that will be in it, but there is one major part of this story that I'm stuck on. Not sure how I'm going to work with it. We'll see
Hey, Well I am a huge fan of Disney. This idea is different and unique I like it. You have a good writing style easy to follow, Your layout looks good. Well done please continue :) Can't wait to see where you go with it :)