Heartland. - Comments

THIS BITCH IS TRIPPIN'
I mean, first you mess with Lars, who's like your dead boyfriend's bro and then you mess with his ACTUAL bro
HOES BE TRIPPIN'
._.
annoyed bee is annoyed.
roman.
MAH BBY ROMAN
CAN I JUST HAVE YOU I MEAN
I WON'T MESS AROUND ON YOU
PROBABLY
YEAH NO
BUT ASDJFL;SDKFJ
ISADORA WHY YOU DO ME LIKE THIS
WHY
WHYYYYYYY D:
sigh.
i'm upset, so i'm going to go eat my feels now
kbai~

I just started reading this, and it's bloody addictive! There's drama in every chapter, I LOVE IT!
Though I do hate the fact that suddenly Isadora realised that Neil never loved her, I mean, no, that's wrong, that's the ONLY thing I absolutely HATE about this story...
Isadora's going crazy, what is she doing with Lars and the guy that supposedly killed her boyfriend? Who apparently didn't love her, and I'm still hoping, praying that in a future chapter you do something that makes her realise she was wrong and Neil actually freaking loved her, and I know that sounds crazy but whatevs...
Haha. Love this!

- Sara.

Whoaaa, what is she doing? I feel like she's losing it. Like, her personality is changing because she's trying to fill the void that Neil's death has left in her. Hmm.

I loved the updates. Keep 'em coming :)

Ahhh, yes, I still don't like Adela! Even though she's kind of right now... Yeah. Isadora's just sleeping around now, and it makes me kind of upset! She's losing herself, maybe to the point where it will be difficult to come back.

I can't believe she went from Lars's room to Roman's room. I mean, wow.

This is great, I really like it.

HOLY COMOLIE
wait, Lars and Isadora. The dead boy's best friend is in love with the dead boy's girlfriend. Oh man. What a story. I ship it. BUT ROMAN D:
Update, Kantiz. Now, plz?

WHAT JUST HAPPENED
WHY
ISADORA WHY
STOP IT
NO OH MY GOD

This is going to cause major major problems, so naturally, I love it.

OH MY GOD. WHATWHYHOW.. DAFUQ?
I really don't like Isadora. Can I punch her or something? Please, Alex? LEMME PUNCH HER.
Like... mkay, first of all, Lars and Neil were best friends, okay Isadora? AND LARS AND ROMAN ARE BROTHERS. YOU WERE JUST MAKING OUT WITH ROMAN AND NOW YOU'RE OVER WITH LARS. KLNJMAKSNKJAHJA OH MY GOD. STOP IT ISADORA. STOP IT. STOP. IT.

BUT ROMAN HAS A MOTORCYCLE
why would you go with wall punching lars
when you have a boy with a motorcycle
gah i want roman back

this gives me feels. i think i already said that, but it's true. i feel lots of feels because of this story right hurr.

neil sounds like he was sort of a man hoe and a jerk.
i don't even know if i like heartland, not yet anyway. even though neil may have been all man hoe-ish and stuff, it's still like, whoa girl, you loved him and you're making out with roman right after neil dies? but like silk tea said, it's sort of like a way of coping, using another man to get those feelings about neil out of the way. hm. but yeah, CONTINUE WITH THE BEAUTY OF THIS HERE STORY PLEASE <3

so uh
hey listen arie
i don't care what you say
isadora is a badass bitch okay
~wuteva~
and she and roman are perfect
and this story is perfect
and lars needs to get slapped
and adela needs to get laid
and neil just needs to go away
and isadora and roman need to be together
yep~

What's Adela's problem? I'm eager to find out about that.
I'm not so sure I like Heartland's character yet, but I have to admit that she's pretty interesting. I like how conflicted she is between Neil and Roman as well.
Gah, Neil seems like such a jerk. I still can't help but feel bad for him though.
I can't wait to see where this is going! Update soon!

I like the way she's coping. Using another man to try and get whatever left over feelings she has for Neil out of her system, it's an interesting coping mechanism and I'm interested in seeing the consequences for it. I also like that she doesn't even bother defending herself like she feels she deserves it.

UPDATE SOON YEAH?

Well, this is an interesting little story. I love it.
Please update soon. I need to read this, like mad.

i'm loving all these updates
but to be honest
isadora/heartland is rather shallow
BUT SHE AND ROMAN ARE GREAT
so i'm gonna ignore her shallowness for now

FOR THE LOVE OF ALL THINGS LOVELY
ARIE
WHY
ALL THESE FEELS
THAT GIF DOWN THERE ACCURATELY PORTRAYS MY EMOTIONS
ALL OF THEM
ARIE
DO YOU KNOW I'M RUNNING OUT OF SPACE IN MY FEELS BUCKET
ROMAN AND ISADORA FOREVER AND EVER NO I DON'T CARE WHAT YOU SAY AND IF ISADORA'S SUPPOSED TO BE A TOTAL BITCH BECAUSE SHE'S PERF AND ROMAN'S PERF AND PERF + PERF = ONE HAPPY BEE
SO YEAH
UH
UPDATE
SOON
please and thank you~

Is his name pronounced like the Romans of Rome or Roman Holiday. I'm assuming it's Roman Holiday, but for some reason I keep saying it like Romans of Rome. Silly me. Update soon. Actually, I should stop saying that because you will anyway hehe.

That's all I have to say about this story.

CAN I CUT HIM NOW
OR WOULD THAT BE OFFENSIVE
'CAUSE HE'S DEAD AND ALL
I MEAN
NO BAD NEIL
BAD BAD NEIL
WELL
UH SHE NEEDS TO GET WITH ROMAN NOW BECAUSE ER
NEIL'S A DICK
YEP
i'm sorry if the updates bother you guys
ARIE SHUT UP OH MY GUSH
stop stop stop
these updates are lovely and wonderful and perf and if you stop updating i'll cry
and i'm out of kleenex so i don't know how that'll work out.
ANYWAY~
all these plot twists are good for the soul.
keep it up~