Heartland. - Comments

CALM THE EFF DOWN HOW DO YOU DO THIS WITH ALL THIS UPDATE. OMG MY STOMACH HURTS.

But ees so good, and Roman can soil my undies anytime no big deal. but Neil, because that's my dad's name.

SO MANY UPDATES FROM YOU = SO MUCH HAPPINESS FROM ME

But oh my god stop it. That's not funny. Stop it. I want to hate you but it's hard but dammit just pretend I do.
Roman, Roman, Roman. I think I'm in love. Okay? Okay.
ADELA HAS PROBLEMS TOO THOUGH. BIG PROBLEMS. AND SHE NEEDS TO CALM HER TITS / GET HER PANTIES OUT OF A TWIST. MAYBE BOTH.
But okay yes.
Isadora and Roman ~ yes please.

ADELA
GIRL YOU NEED TO CALM DOWN
FOOL GETTING ALL UP IN MY MAIN QRL'S GRILL LIKE SHE RUNS THIS PLACE OR SOMETHIN'
~now she's on my list.
AND LARS JUST HANGIN' AROUND THERE
FOOL WHAT ARE YOU DOING HERE
I just
ugh
adela no one likes you now go~
So in conclusion, the summation of my feels is as follows:
isadora & roman fo'eva~
And you can quote me on that. ~sass~

YOU DID UPDATE
HOORAY
adela is the whore
not isadora
so go away whoredela and leave roman and isadora to their lovely lip sucking <3
also lars, i used to like you. and i do, deep down, but you're kind of a twat. <3
GO ISADORA! WOO

UM, WELL, THAT WAS AWK.

so many updates omg

OKAY SO SHE'S CRAZY BUT ROMAN'S REALLY SEXY OKAY
like oaihngkesnpoajgeos-omg sexy
he's dark and tortured and sultry and aighelkjaowngla PLEASE LET ME LOVE HIM
I DON'T HATE HIM...yet. Yet but I might but don't make me hate him because I love him because mmm
But yeah. This is great and I love it and you're great too because of the author's note and please update again
Please
please
please
I am
begging
you.
Seriously, I really really adore this story. And freakin' Roman, man.
I want to keep reading this and I want it to keep going and going so write faster because I'm like what that other person said. I'm eating without tasting and then really moody and upset when there's none left. MORE PLEASE.

OKAY, ROMAN IS HAWT, OKAY?
hawwwwt.
but I don't know if I like him.
'Cause like, what if he says he didn't kill Neil bUT HE REALLY DID.
idek man.
but this story gives me feels. about neil. about isadora missing neil. and about friggin roman, too.
so yeah, i think you should update soon.
and by soon, i mean right about.... now. ;D
LUH YEW.

ADJFKHSDJKFHSDF
FOOL
OH MY GOD
ROMAN CAN I JUST
LET ME LURVE YOU~
THIS IS JUST PERFECT
AND
I JUST
ALL THESE FEELS
ARIE WHY DO YOU DO THIS TO ME
WHY
WHY CAN'T YOU JUST NOT DO THIS
WHY
SIGH TEARS ALL MY TEARS
EVERYWHERE
So um, cough, this is as per usual perfect so idk bro~
And as for Roman, the only reason he's tortured is because he's uh
you know
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and maybe he just can't handle it I mean it's a big responsibility
coupled with all his random appearances
that i'm not at all complaining about
because he seems
scrumdiddlyumptious
yeah
i just said that
anyway
uh
yeah.
he just seems
like
you know
really
aklsdjflksdfj
so.
I think this is wonderfully perfect
yep yep yep~

chapter 4:
roman is hot
i like bad boys
and tortured souls
the broodier, the better
know what i'm sayin?
do you know what i'm sayin?
i sort of feel like you're rushing the relationship between roman and heartland (have you said her name? i can't remember. it's so good i just eat and eat and eat without tasting it). but this beautiful
i love it

chapter 3: i like the butterfly kisses thing. that's sweet. lsdfsldkfjklsdf I LOVE ROMAN
he sounds really hot
like way hot
i like that they had pet names and i'm not sure if this is going to turn into some sci-fi two-hot-guys-one-body type thing or what but i like it

chapter 3: i like the butterfly kisses thing. that's sweet. lsdfsldkfjklsdf I LOVE ROMAN
he sounds really hot
like way hot
i like that they had pet names and i'm not sure if this is going to turn into some sci-fi two-hot-guys-one-body type thing or what but i like it

OMG YOU UPDATED LIKE THREE TIMES
OMG
YAY
HAPPY PLACE
chapter 2: arista is a beautiful name. roman is also a good name. you're a good name picker.

wait I like Roman too okay? he's hot ;)
WHOA THEY KISSED. OH MAN. Can I kiss him? Oops, did I just say that out loud (I actually just did too. AWKBERG)
gr9 update kantiz <3

IAUBGJNKELOGH
I can't tell if she's going crazy
or you're fucking with us
And I think omg IS HE DEAD OR NOT?
BUT THE AUTHORS NOTE MADE ME HAPPY BECAUSE YOU'RE SWEET AND LOVELY ♡
Now update again please~ Because I'm in love with this story

ARIE
YOU KNOW I HAVE FEELINGS
I HAVE THESE THINGS
THEY'RE CALLED FEELS
AND YOU HURT THEM WHEN YOU DO THINGS LIKE THIS
SIGH ARIE
WHYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY
Is he dead? OR IS ROMAN JUST LIKE YOU KNOW CRAY TO BORROW PELICAN PARK'S WORD
IS HE
TELL ME
I DESERVE TO KNOW!! D:
and the whole mirchoff thing
YOU THOUGHT I WOULDN'T NOTICE
SIGH
beau is perf
so i'm just going to imagine them all as beau sigh okay well um
i would
consider
perhaps
maybe
updating
soon
~this is non-negotiable~

she's goin' cray

whoa damn!
UPDATE MAN.

ugh why roman
srsly can you just be a hottie on a motorcycle
that would be great

also i just noticed that neil's last name was mirchoff ;)

NOT ONE BUT TWO
two updates
ARIE
ARIE WHY YOU GOTTA DO ME LIKE THIS
qrl
okay okay okay i'm okay
WHAT JUST HAPPENED
THE FIRST CHAPTER WAS ALL
oh my gush
neil
~tears for neil yo~
and THEN MOTORCYCLE PERSON COMES
AND IT JUST GETS REAL.
~i need some tissues~
AND THEN I READ THE NEXT CHAPTER
and ARIE
my feels.
ALL THESE FEELS
And the name
Roman
ARIE WHY
WHY DO YOU DO THIS TO ME
WHY DID THIS HAPPEN HOW WHEN WHAT EVEN WHY DID HE DO THAT WAS HE FRAMED
I DON'T KNOW
ARIE I DON'T KNOW AND THIS GREATLY UPSETS ME SO YOU SHOULD FIX THAT.
BY UPDATING.
SOON.
So I'm just going to sit here and wait for you to do that And if you're looking for a convenient time, NOW would be awesome okay?
This is perfect but I'm not surprised because everything you write is perfect, so yeah. c: