Heartland. - Comments

omg
heartland tho
heartland and roman forever
you go qrl
you show neil who's who
even if he's dead
and lars
lars tho
baby
let me hold you like UGH
oh snap
oh my god
HEARTLAND QRL Y U UP IN MY MAN'S BUSINESS
qrl
hrumph
you're going to be the cause of my undoing
not if i undo you first roman
oooOOOOOOOOOoOOOo
heartland though
i can't even stay mad at you UGH
and neil
CAN U NOT
u little shit ugh
this story is making me so emotional
and i have like ten more chapters to go
I CAN DO THIS
maybe
probably not either way arie like ugh this story is SO GOOD
seriously
i'm not trying to be sassy
it's perfect
and it's so intricate
and i love it very very much c:

can i just hold lars
like
he seems so angsty and angry
and angsty angry boys are more prone to making out it's been proven jsyk like
omg
and heartland needs to stop seeing things
but
roman tho
roman babe
like
luv me
mirchoff hrm
like beau mirchoff
because beau is hot too
i'm just sayin'
and neil
i'mma bring you back just so i can kill you like goddamn
sighhhhh
and i'm only on chapter five too

I'm about convinced that Heartland is crazier than actual hell. I've been meanin to read this story for ages, but never gotten around to it. I am glad I finally got a chance to read it. Though, I am completely, utterly, and thoroughly confused. I think Heartland is too, though, because between Neil / Roman / Lars I just don't know what to think. I do think that she needs to forget about Neil though because honestly the only memories she seems to have of him are sexual. I feel as if Roman would provide more than that. Lars.. something about him is too fricking sketchy for me and I don't know why. I still want to know who that dude at Neil's wake was. I want to know what the actual frick happened to Neil. I also want to know why the frick Lars thinks that Roman killed Neil. This entire story is very dreamlike and just... surreal. I don't know, it's a strange thing to describe. Almost like she's always suspended in a universe of her own. A universe where only Neil exists and that's unfortunate because to be honest he didn't sound that great. Very interesting read! ❤

damn
i have a lot to catch up on don't i omg
i'm on it
expect a sassy comment sometime this evening or early tomorrow bb

WHAT THE EFF IS EVEN GOING ON
WHAT IS LIFE
WHAT IS BREATHING
WHAT IS NEIL

NEIL?

ROMAN?

LARS?

I DON'T KNOW NOW.

My heart aches for this girl :(
Like seriously you write so well and god, she was crazy to begin with but you can be damn sure I'd go cray if Ryan went and died out of no where.

i know this is supposed to be a serious and dark chapter and that but when heartland was like 'i dont need food i just need neil' my mind kind of just flew into dirtiness and hehehehehheheheheheeh

roman is so hot i want to lick his face

and maybe heartland can turn that frown upside down and focus her energy on roman who will probably lick her face if she asked idk i can see it happening

i think this may be one of my favourite chapters
firstly, because it was short and sweet and basically perfection
secondly because the flow of this just ugh
it's so beautifully written and realistic and poetic and ugh
ugh alex ugh
aw heartland

this story is so sad but it doesn't pull me down y'know
like sometimes you read stories and they're so depressing
but yours is like, like it's sad and defs depresso but idk i have hope for heartland
GO HEARTLAND GO GET OVER NEIL
i have high hopes

NEIL GO AWAY
NOBODY WANTS YOU
except for heartland but she doesn't know what she wants ok she's effing delusional and shit
how do you delusionise though that you're doing someone though
i guess grief does that to you
IT'S SO REAL THO

heartland kind of annoys me but i feel sorry for that poor lass
can i have roman he's hot
or roman get with heartland even though him and neil used to be close whatevs yolo

why are you so great

NEIL WHAT ARE YOU DOING TO ME AND ISADORA WHAAAT AREEEE YOOOOOU DOOOOING

brilliant as always

okay right so let me just get something out in the open
I've wanted to read this for ages. Like, AGES. Like, I'd open up the page to this and I'd look at the summary and think 'wow that's a pretty layout' but then 2927429 tabs later I've completely forgotten about reading this and it's 3am and it's time to sleep. So then the next morning I'm like 'okay I have to read Heartland because vices wrote it so obvs it's gonna be good, don't forget' and then I open youtube or facebook or something and then it gets forgotten AGAIN.

SO TODAY instead of studying for my exams I was like yolo i'm going to read this and now I'm wondering why I forgot about it BECAUSE HI THIS IS AMAZING

Like every chapter pulls me in and I'm thinking 'damn Heartland control your legs' because she seems to be opening them a lot idk man it's just what I noticed but then I understand because she misses Neil. But then Neil's an asshole who cheated on her so she sexes Roman who killed him? And Lars oooh he's sexy and Adela shut up you attention seeker. But then Isadora gets all mysterious on us and says Neil isn't dead but I think that's her imagination or she's actually going to the cemetery to talk to that cheeky bastard.
AND OH I didn't realise lars and roman were related oooh getting it on with two brothers, that's like ELENA but naturally I like Heartland better because she doesn't seem to have as much emotions as Elena does.

I think in the mess of a comment I tried to make is that I really fucking love this and it's so dark and it pulls me in and at the end of every chapter I'm like 'hi wowness'. All of the characters are so complex and interesting and ugh, you're perfection.

Neil isn't dead. WHUT

Neil isn't dead whaaaaaa? Sometimes with this story I can't separate reality from her imagination and I looove that.

sometimes I feel bad for Isadora :(
but then I remember she'll hit me with a car if I cross her so it's better to just watch her story unfold
lolololol

This is like ice cream to me, I have to have it everyday.

Why is this story so dark and alluring? Nope, don't answer the question.

I'm melting right now for Roman.

oh my god. that was so dark. you're brilliant, you know?

the imagery in this chapter was beautiful. you have a way with words, young lady.

she is so deliciously evil IT'S AMAZING
SO FREAKING AMAZING.
I need to know why she's like this like now

this chapter is criminally sexy. like damn.