Five Lies - Comments

oh shit!
this was pretty good for a short come back chapter.
I wants more.
:3

:3 you and your short and sweet chapters!
It turned out very nicely for a come back though!
I can't wait for the next chapter

This comment shall be short and sweet but nicely done man I loved it.

Though you say it's not that great, I loved it, short and sweet and too the point!
So much happening that brings old memories forth and she realizes her mistakes. I love it.

Now THAT is how you end a chapter! *round of applause*
Okay have to a play by play on this because that's how I'm organizing my thoughts here today.
First Up: Cash, f-ing adorable that little kid made me grin from ear to ear with his cuteness.
Second: The beginning felt like one of those awkward turtle moments and I could literally feel the main character's confusion. Nicely done.
Third: The ending...their closeness...my breath literally caught when I read it. Beautiful just BEAUTIFUL
This was a beautifully constructed chapter. I loved it.

Hahaha brava Mishy!
This was an amazing chapter of showing Cash into the picture and everything happening.
And Uri being a dumby and not shutting up.
Why does she think she used to play with them?
Also, epic end to the chapter!
Loves it!
Can't wait for more!
LXIII

I love reading the stuff you write, you always know how to britten my day! I can't wait to read more!!

Well this was a very fantastic chapter and a very awesome way to introduce other characters into the game.
Very nicely done and well played.
I can see a beautiful story unfolding here my friend.

hehehehhehehehhehehehheh Uri's character makes me laugh!
Her and her crazy hyperness and tackling of line backers.
it was an awesomesauciness chapter and i'm panting for more.
I can just wolf down this stuff.
Keep the pack coming!
Love you ;)

You my friend lied!!
This chapter was bloody brilliant!
You have a crazy knack of bringing people's inner turmoil to the surface, but in writing that isn't a bad thing.
I can't wait to see what you come up with next.
Love you, LXIII

Can you pretty please update soon!?!? I like the way you write!

You Did An Excellent Job Anyway Michelle.
You Wrapped Up Jacob's Turmoil, Pain, Suffering, and Heartache Weaving A Tale Of How He Became What He Is.
I Wonder How Phoenix Is Going To Take The News.
There Are SO Many Directions You Can Take This.
I'm Excited To See Which Path You Take.
Nicely Done Michelle This Was Really Good!

Grr...Now I Gotta Remember What I Wrote From My Last Comment That Got Deleted.
Okay OH I Remember I Definitely Know How You Feel About Not Being Able To Tell Accurate Descriptions Of People When It Comes To Pictures I Know Its Really Hard To Find A Good Picture Of Hotness Nowadays. lol
I Definitely Love The Main Character! She Be Very Relateable To And She Made Me Laugh With The 'Scare The Fish Out Of Me' Tidbit.
I Am Very Excited To See What You've Got Next!
Please Continue And Update Soon My Friend.

hahhahahahahhahahhahh scared the fish out of me!
hah love it!
This was an awesomely epic chapter and I can't wait for more!
I'm hyper typing this.
And and and and and I love her cocky attitude!
So B.A!

I DID! I ENJOYED IT! NICELY DONE!!

Now that is what I call one hell of a intro!
BAMF! straight up!
I totally did not see the wolf hunter coming in.
Can't wait for more.
Love you Nevaeh!

Now that is what I call one hell of a intro!
BAMF! straight up!
I totally did not see the wolf hunter coming in.
Can't wait for more.
Love you Nevaeh!