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  • Dedicated Stereotype

    Dedicated Stereotype (100)

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    From what I've read, this story seems great. It has good character voice and a sense of mystery to it. I have two cons:

    1. The colour of the font makes it difficult to read.
    2. There are several grammatical errors, including some sentences that don't make sense.

    Very Happy
    August 13th, 2012 at 05:05am
  • Pianosfilledwithfire

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    another killer story my friend! i told you this one would be good and it looks as if i was right :)
    August 12th, 2012 at 08:04pm
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