August 16th, 2012 at 03:33am
So its really hard for me to read this, the theme makes it so difficult, and I have no idea who this is about so that made it ten times harder... sorry.
Keep writing and good luck
A Whole New World, A Whole New Life - Comments
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August 16th, 2012 at 03:02am
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@ ThatKidNamedCarson
Thank you so much....I haven't started writing again in years I'm glad you like it. Sesshomaru is my favorite as well! :) I will try to start on the next chapter some time today or maybe tomorrow. :)August 15th, 2012 at 01:17am -
August 15th, 2012 at 01:16am
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Omg I love this already! Sesshomaru its my favorite character from the Inuyasha series. Im definitely subscribing. :)
Update soon :)August 15th, 2012 at 12:23am
well if you read the note i put at the end at chapter 1 you will see that it is a sesshomaru story.....I decided that I wasn't going to bring Sesshomaru in the story permamtently right away I want to put some other thing into it. And I am still working on the summary thing I plan to revise it and make it more clear. Thats the best I could do on short notice so that is why it is like that for now. I've read so many Sesshomaru stories and most of them they rush into the whole action and romance scenes I want to try to make mine last if you know what I mean. Although I put Sesshomaru in the second chapter it was only a quick appearance. Thanks for the critique though, I appreciate the honesty.