comment swap- im not a One Direction fan but i can tell from the first 2 chapters you've written that the story is well written and has great detail. The flow of the story is also quite nice making the story easy to read and understand. I like how you capture each characters feelings and such like the feet tapping on the ground nervously; it really helps to set a scene and then makes the story that much better. Lovely work!!
May 15th, 2015 at 03:16am