One Thing - Comments

I'm enjoying this story!

oh no! update soonn i wanna know how the guys feel...and their boss :(

just caught up with this story and i love it! update soon! :D

Wow! Can't wait for the next one!! Love it! :-D

I can't wait for more!!! I'm excited to see how Harry and Harley's relationship plays out! Ashlynn and Zayn are soo cute!!!

Dawwww Harry! And a slightly jealous Zayn maybe?! I like!!!

haha i loved this last chapter! xxxx

I just wanted to tell you that I think your story is awesome! I love your style you have in your writing and its amazing! I think its gonna have an amazing plot and I cannot wait! And to be honest, I do not really even like One Direction, so that is saying a lot! I hope you continue to write other stories cause you're great at it! Looking forward to the new chapters!

Haha I hope she does spoil the ending for Harry that would be funny!!!

Wow I just found this story and I'm really liking it so far!!! Can't wait for more!!!

Here from comment swap!
Wow. So the 1D fangirl in me definitely screamed when I saw this. I love cheesy, and fun stories so this was perfect for me. I really like the story so far and the dynamic between their relationship with the boys is definitely interesting. I really like it, keep up the good work! Also, good luck with the rest.

-Jess xx

Love it!

this is so incredibly cute :) I love how you word things and style them in paragraphs ^.^ I never thought I'd fine a good One Direction fic but yours is definitely my favorite :3!

Update please? I really like this story, actually! :) xx

I'm excited/curious to see Harley and Ashlynn's reaction once they find out that the 'five year old' is one of the guys they have to work for or babysitt.Im loving the humor you've added,one of my favorites would be Harley telling Niall to put a leash on Louis:D.I've been thinking how interesting things are going to be since Harley and Harry are paired together.They both didn't make very good impressions on each other.Im done rambling now,sorry haha.
Hope for more soon!:)

Here because of comment swap :)
I think the chapter length is good, and the plot seems interesting too. I also like the story of how the two girls met, and when the fangirl broke in and had to be carried out, it's good that you're adding humour to this! Overall, pretty good even though I don't read 1D fanfics. :)