I'm sorry you didn't like the recent chapter! I loved it. Even though his family didn't see it, it totally proved she's not a stick in the mud and they're actually really playful. Plus, it shows a whole new dynamic in their relationship at the end, where he genuinely cares about her feelings and wanting to prove he cares for her. it's a perfect, well rounded chapter!
@ fine.frenzy Unless you were just changing it around for the story o.o if that's the case I understand. I mean you have been doing a great job I like it and subscribed and everything ^-^b
@ fine.frenzy Just toy around with it.. no matter where it goes you can always change it!!! :) That's one of the best parts about writing, your in complete control. You should do a story about conor dwyer :)
@ harajukulvrr Conor, yes! Conor Dwyer that sidekick! And he did help Natalie make Ryan jealous early on, but I like flirting with the idea of using him to do it again! I just need to sit and think more about where I want it to go and turn!
Thank you! I appreciate the comment!