I think this is really good. There has to be at least some conflict to make any story good. I think Ryan should get jealous about a guy hitting on her at some point :)
I really love this. It's so well written! It doesn't make me cringe like half the stories on here because the grammar is correct and it's more than just a good story.
Oh but you keep saying Conner and I'm preeeeetty sure you mean Cullen, Cullen Jones.